| "Obsidian Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Firefly_of_death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 16:33 CDT
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I really like this story. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:8 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Tanzanite Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:37 CST
Comment/Review:
this fic is awesome
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Reviewed By: ChibiTina-kun On: November 26, 2004 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, nice fic! Though I think there could be a little more Hota/Hiei-ness. Haha, the tournament idea was great as well. But I don't think the sailors should butt in so soon, at least not until Hiei and Hotaru officially state their feelings for each other, unless you have that whole thing figured out..But regardless, it's great! Be sure to continue onegaishimasu! [[out of curiousity, why don't you use the senshi's Japanese names? And I also think something should happen soon that forces Hota to transform, with controll over her power of course]]
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Title: up date up date
Reviewed By: Sailor Ra On: November 21, 2004 16:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!But its 2004 and soon to be 2005 so please up date. I look to see if you have writen any new chapters!!! So up date please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: up date up date
Reviewed By: Sailor Ra On: November 21, 2004 16:09 CST
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I love it!!!!But its 2004 and soon to be 2005 so please up date. I look to see if you have writen any new chapters!!! So up date please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Silent Saturn On: November 09, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story. So cool. Hotaru and Hiei are my all time fave pair. Can't wait till you update to see what happens next. Will bye.
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Title: problems...
Reviewed By: Veste On: August 29, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice and entertaining story - but the lack of proper grammar and spelling kinda puts you off - and next time - whenever someone new is speaking, put that dialogue in a new paragraph - cuz sometimes your paragraphs are hard to read and you get confused easily. But don't be offended, just some constructive criticism, I really did like your story! :) Shishiwakamaru falling for Hotaru was a great part - I loved it and how Hiei gets so angry when other guys try to hit on Hotaru, and Yusuke playing match-maker? Haha, the part where he pushed Hota-chan towards Hiei was really kawaii! Anyways, please update soon, your story's really interesting, just fix your grammar and spelling and your story will look a lot better. Again, this is just some constructive criticism - don't get angry, be happy! :P And, you also started this in fanfiction.net right? It'd be cool if you put the story there a different version, but still a Hiei/Hotaru coupling. Well, this is all I have to say - fun story - update soon.
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Reviewed By: lib On: July 17, 2004 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really liked you story and have been waiting to see if you would up date it so could you please up date!?
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: random person On: June 23, 2004 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! So good!
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Title: Obsidian Tears
Reviewed By: Sailor Wind (aka Neonas) On: June 21, 2004 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That is just too cool!! If you need help e-mail me (sailoruniverse@loveable.com). I think that u should really try 2 get other couples involved. Not just Hotaru with Hiei but also like...Trista and Kurama (I can imagin that) or possibly (if u want 2 break up the whole lesbian story in ur fanfic) Jin with Amara and Michelle with Kurama tehn have Pluto permenently put Koenma in his older form. GREAT IDEA with the Kuwa'baka' stuff. PURE GENIUS!! You should try becoming a quiz writer on quizilla or something (I'm a member known as "Neonas"...I make R U 4 Hiei quizzes) ^-~. I'll check on ur story more!! Write more 2 finish!! Great Job!! =D
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Reviewed By: anmc On: March 25, 2004 21:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Good,good,good, and did i mention it was a good fanfic? PLs continue and update soon!
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Title: The child of Hiei and Hotaru
Reviewed By: Isla Leilani Murphey On: March 12, 2004 05:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I'm back again! I love your story sooo much, that I'm gonna vote you the no. 1 H/H fanfic writer! By the way, if Hiei and Hotaru had a child in the future, make sure it's a boy and the name will be Ichiro, means "First son". Keep up the story! Or I'll haunt you in your dreams.... Just kidding!^_^
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Reviewed By: hell_phoenix On: March 10, 2004 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! I like the story especially Hotaru/Hiei! ^_^ Pls Continue!
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Reviewed By: Spring Cat On: March 08, 2004 15:19 CST
Comment/Review:
You rule!*dances*Plz update I wanna see what hapends.
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