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Title: Good but
Reviewed By: DAZ306 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is realllllllllllllllly good but when are you going to update???? please update soon!!!!!!!!! more or so, before 2008......?
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Title: don't read
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 19:34 CDT
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WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CR
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 23:24 CDT
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hi there! i read your story and i quite like it, but i think your rushing the story line a bit. i suggest you take more time to develop the relationships of the characters and the setting and story line its self. and dont forget detail! you've done well with intimate scenes (;D) but i think you could take some more time on the other scenes aswell. over all this a good story n_n thank you for writing it =3
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Title: Condom City
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Condom City
Reviewed By: FranklinBe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic. Please update soon! I like the way Sesshomaru gets Kagome but I think that Kagome killing Naraku was too rushed, I think Naraku was a little OOC (out of character) Otherwise it was a very fun and enjoyable and one of the best I have read. Keep up the good work. Please, please, please, update soon! I can't wait!
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Title: Condom City
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 23:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: wOOT
Reviewed By: Alysh On: April 20, 2005 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why didn't my coment appear below :'( n e ways..... OMG i luv ur story!!!! its an awesome read, and is really original and funny. To sum it all up its an awesom read and i am looking forward to the next chappie. if it isn't soon i might cry!!! oh, but i kinda feel sorry for inu though...
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Reviewed By: Alysh On: April 20, 2005 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: chapter 8
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait to read the sequel.
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Title: Condom City
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: yumemiru/AMANDA On: March 07, 2005 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAAAAAAA!!!!! They didn't sleep together!!!! Im such a perv..lol ^^
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Title: Interesting read
Reviewed By: Syn Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very solid effort on your part. Few people can blend contraceptives, comedy, and feudal Japan. Yet, you managed to pull it off. I anticipate the "thrilling climax." (All Puns intended) Syn Alexander
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 18:26 CST
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great job so far...I'm really looking forward to the last chappie and epilogue...^^ update soon!
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Title: aww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 01, 2005 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love Sesshy/Kag fic's seeing how i'm in love with Sesshomaru! ^_^ well anywho whoever flames your forthat pairing and just stops reading need's to go to hell!!! well anywho keep up the good work and please? update again soon i really really really really really (*got enought reallys in there? ...um..... NO) really really really ...... love this fic! so update soon!
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Reviewed By: kaghater On: March 01, 2005 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
no affence but i think that kag is a bitch and that you should get inuyasha with something no offence to you just i think she really sucks and inuyasha is awsome so make him kinda happy
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Reviewed By: morwen_re [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 06:08 CST
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good! is the next chapter a lemon?
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Reviewed By: Akuma_Matata On: February 28, 2005 16:43 CST
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AWWW poor Inu, @ 1st I liked this story but now that its Sesshy and Kag I'm just going 2 find a new fic sorry.
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Title: inurevelation
Reviewed By: InuRevelation [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 09:58 CST
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I almost didn't read this because I thought it would be like latex blues but then wanted to read something funny this morning so I took a chance. And I really like this. It is very good. Of course, I really want to know the name of the story that this is a prequel to. Please let us know. I will def. be reading more of your stories!
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Title: awww.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww.... so this is gonna end up being a Sesshy/Kag fic? well anywho keep up the good work and update again soon please? it looked like a Inu/Kag fic but it's all good!
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Massao On: January 29, 2005 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sesshie is so sweet and caring in here! and the mothr thing was unique! no one thought of itthat way! none that i know of anyway! nice! :D
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Reviewed By: crazydontcoverit On: January 22, 2005 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool i luved it. Keep wondering who kagome's ganna pick! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: kougagurl666 On: January 22, 2005 15:16 CST
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NOOOO you can't stop it there you are evil!!!!! I want more please update again soon I can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: essies On: January 22, 2005 11:05 CST
Comment/Review:
please update
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Reviewed By: Narlyenatvanya On: January 22, 2005 04:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your fic so far. It's interesting to see how you've created the personalities of the inu-brothers, as well as Kagome. I'd love to see you update again soon, but I know life can be hard, so take your time. I would like to mention, however, that when writing the dialogues in quotes, please try to put question marks where there are questions. It's just easier (for me) to be able to see the proper punctuation. Having mentioned that, though, I'd also like to commend you for your style. I very much enjoy it and that you use (mostly) proper grammar. Also, you mentioned that this is a prequel to another fic you've written. Are you willing to say which it is, or do you want us to wait until the end of this one to find out?
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Reviewed By: HuHu_huggiez On: January 22, 2005 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH SHIT WOW....... UPDATE!! OOO SESSHIEE IS GETTING TO CLOSE TO KAGOME PLEASE CHANGE THAT LOL
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Reviewed By: soonchaos On: January 22, 2005 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute chappie. sess is so sweet! i like i like! but don't make him too sweet or else he'll lose that trademark arrogance of his. ^^ not much happened, just an intro into a bad situation kagome gets herself into, right? but its an update! yay!!!!!!!
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Title: Condom City
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 21, 2004 16:22 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Condom City
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 03, 2004 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 02:48 CDT
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I like the fic. Great read. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: October 05, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story! I can't wait to see how it turns out and how Kagome is going to explain what condoms really are. God, that's funny just thinking about it!
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