| "Dogs in Tokyo" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Title: Yippee!!!!!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 15:09 CDT
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ahhh.. /happy, happy!/ found this by complete accident! my laptop died, and with it all my links... /sigh/ anywho! I am REALLY REALLY enjoying this! /does happy dance/ and i can't wait till the next chappy! ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 15:54 CDT
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So...I guess I have to say, it's very well written. Although, I do have issues with his structure. Half the time, it's difficult to understand what in blue hell is going on. So much unexplained! I will take it that you haven't finished the story though and I am eager to see if you remedy this little problem.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 15:03 CDT
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So...I'm nowhere near finished with this fic but I must say I'm impressed...and a little jealous. Your portrayal of Tokyo and Japanese culture is flawless. As for the characters, Inu-Yasha is fantastic as is Kagome, though I noticed she seems to only play a small part. I'm eager to read what's left to come.
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Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 21:50 CDT
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Can you believe I just found this story? It's really rolling along well. (I particularly liked Souta's stint in the French restaurant kitchen.) Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 19:07 CDT
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yha you updated this is a great chapter i can see the troubal brewing all ready great job update agian soon
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 18:20 CDT
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I'm so glad you updated! I love this story - have since you began to post it. ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: dreamwalker620 On: August 11, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic! Definitely one of me faves. LOL I loved the whole random Buyo-in-the-sink scene. XDD And the rest of course. >_> Yup. I'm one of those people who goes to a palace and notices one of the chandelier candles is out. ^^; Anyways, great fic! Keep workin on it, kk? ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes review's are nice so i will give you one!! ^_^ keep up the good work that was wonderful!!! ^_^update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: freefallingtowardthesky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. So. I'm liking the cool new twists you've put in here, Inuyasha's secret house, the Staff of Heads gate and all that. That's original and neat. However, I think you're lacking in the detail department. You say Inuyasha pulls out Tessaiga to defeat the monsters, where does he pull it out from? Has Sesshomaru gated to the 20th/21st century using the Staff of Heads, or did he and Jaken just survive through all those years? And why on earth would he need body guards? What's happened to Miroku, Sango, and Shippo? It sounds like Kagome and Inuyasha have been in the future for a while now, I would think they would have gone back in time to visit their friends at least once. What exactly is Sesshomaru doing in this time besides running a theme park? You have a really fun story, but it just needs to be fleshed out some more. You seem to go from idea to idea without really expanding on what people are doing or why they're doing it. I would like to read more of this story, so please, keep up the good work. :D
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soooo good keep up the good work!! ^_^ update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: July 01, 2004 17:36 CDT
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Another superb chapter- I'm enjoying the story but I got a little lost at the end- Is Sesshoumaru being forced to shop with Higurashi-san? I luv Sess but serves him right. Oh yes, and the demon that Inu Yasha battled sounds like a description from LOR where I fav Grey turned White wizard battles that fire efreet!
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Title: long enough
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i didn't mind the wating as much but it was good enought to wate for keep up the good work and keep updating ~~~!!!!! ^__^ yay for u!
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Title: done
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 22:54 CDT
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ok i only stop to watch InuYasha on TV but i finished and it was all good i can't wate till u up date it again so i can continue reading ^^ i can't wate ur s good at this i hope hojo is ok and i can't wate to read bu InuYasha and Kagome's wedding i hope i can read it soon good job! ^~ keep up the good work! hope to be reading ur wor in the futuer .... ok well adult swim is on! nbye and once again good job ....... oh and one mor this i want my COOKIE! lmhoafoomc!..(email me i u wanna find out what that means @ lovebug248@kiwibox.com) he he he he he he he *enjoys*
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Title: cookie
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where's my cook i'm giveing u a great review so were's my cookie i want it !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 28, 2004 18:03 CDT
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The story is going very well and you're killing me with suspense! I wish someone would catch that wench and use the Staff of Heads on her! Btw, love the entrance of Sesshoumaru. Poor Dog Boy! That Hojo is such a bumble at times!
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