| "Hiei's Dare" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zdawg [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE UPDATES!! this is a really good fic! keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Mel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 21:14 CDT
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DAMN! *pictures Hiei in the blue school uniform* *SQUEEEEEEEEEEELS!!!*
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Reviewed By: JessiRae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 22:14 CDT
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YO!!!! When are you going to update???
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Reviewed By: lolgirl On: September 11, 2003 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe this is GREAT!Man keep this up!I can't wait for the next ch.I am waiting and i don't like to wait.^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kirara_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 21:13 CDT
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This is such an awesome fic!!! i just luv what Hiei did to Mr.......that guys room!! ^____________^ can't wait to read more chapters! UPDATE SOON!!!!! |
Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha, Hiei playing at being a ningen??? Too funny ^_~ Kuwa-chan got him good on this one! Not to mention the firebaby has Kurama's aptitude for the work and Yusuke's attitude for the school (thanks to those idiot teachers anyway >< ) |
Reviewed By: Kohaku Hishi On: September 07, 2003 00:37 CDT
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This is funny! me likey. write more. need a friend? call Kohaku Hoshi! I, Kohaku, am a crazy type who has a hidden evil streak. |
Title: ...Moo?
Reviewed By: WizardessGal On: September 06, 2003 23:21 CDT
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Ooh, Aya likes! 'S a good idea; I don't think I've seen it done quite like this before. But, one thing, I suggest you write out the word "and". Just putting & looks unprofisionaly and gets somewhat annoying after a while. ^_^ Just some advice. As for more characters, that might be a good idea. You COULD find him a girl... that would be grand... So long as it's not an insert, of course. But it would really add to the tension, or whatever. And I don't like the idea of sticking in reviewers unless it's specifically supposed to include them, like "Ask the ___ characters" or "___ Fangirl Club abducts ___", or something like that. I just don't think it would work out for this. But anyway, good job! This is good! |
Reviewed By: Zdawg [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 14:41 CDT
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yeah, jin's girl is right. u should add a few people to the story. if u do, can i be in it? |
Title: I do not require a title
Reviewed By: None of your concern On: September 05, 2003 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a good story. The autor doesn't change the caracteristics of the characters too much. |
Reviewed By: Jin's girl On: September 05, 2003 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is gonna be good! Hiei in school! i can't wait til next chapter. can i be one of thier school friends? please. |
Reviewed By: Hiei/Kurama On: September 05, 2003 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just like Crap-a-roni and cheese this story was funny. Hiei, Hiei, he' s our demon,
If he cant do it....... never mind, I have to go find a lemon.
Grea story!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Zdawg [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutly loved it!!! who could ever imagine hiei in school? ha!! i love hiei and all, but still, him at school?! can't wait till the next chappy!!! update soon or i hunt u down and kill u!!! (jk: i'd only do that if u really pissed me off! which u haven't done YET^_^) |
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