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Reviewed By: squirrelboy On: April 15, 2004 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far so good really good
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this stor is outstanding it's just that great please update soon
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 16:07 CDT
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Sango and Miroku are soo cute!! ^__^. This was a really good chapter. I'm glad you got the hcapter to update, and hope you get another one soon.
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Title: AAAAWESOMME
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Kagome handles the news she was given.
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Title: what would you do
Reviewed By: Kagomereborn*nsn On: February 28, 2004 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad you updated !...keep it up...now on to my question... i recently had a friend ask me this question but i was so shocked i didn't know what to tell her so i was wondering what you would say. you see her friend happened to decide that her new nickname will be Babybutt now he decided to tell her this in front of her classmates during her break...now i ask you what would you do if someone suddenly decided to start calling you Babybutt, I mean Babybutt the name its beyond condestation..babybutt...*shakes head, and walks away*
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Title: Meru
Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 23:13 CST
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sorrie i was on a LOT of sugar^^ Whoo that chapter was great too! you can beat writers block! It sucks but I BELIEVE IN YOO! Cant wait for the next chapter :P
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 15:09 CST
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w00t! Update baby!! YEA! I love this chapter. It was grrrrreat! Lots of info and stuff. Who doesn't like info? I can't wait to see what happens hext. I hope you can update soon. Boo writers block, KICK IT'S ASS!!
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Title: NEED! MORE!
Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only just read your fic last night but I LOVE IT!!!!!! **looms over Jade's other shoulder that is unoccupied by KagomeReborn** WRITE THAT CHAPTER!!!:P **waves little japanese fans with Jades face on them and somehow ended up wearing a kimono** **is now a cheerleader** GO JADE! GO JADE! **does the splits**
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: February 21, 2004 12:09 CST
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This was a really really good chapter. I can't believe Inu cried open like that. It was sooo cute!!! I guess I think Inuyasha is cute no matter what....Oh well, poor me lol. I hope you can atleast occassionally win against your writers block and update. But I totally understand how much of a bitch it can be lol. Take care!
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Title: Orb
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 15:45 CST
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Yay! I'm finally caught up with everyone else lol. I love this fic, and I love Inuyasha. He's ooc, but sooo sweet, I wish he was my puppy heeheehee...O_O....I mean, I'm not a hentai....
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Reviewed By: iire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it, please add a chapter,or 2 or 10.
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: January 22, 2004 17:22 CST
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I love this story so much. It's so cute. And the new characters are rreally interseting. I'm only on chapter...17 maybe? But I really like it. I can't WAIT to see what happens next. And if Sess and Sakura are eachothers *is thinking*...DON'T SPOIL IT FOR ME!!! lol I can't wait to read on
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Reviewed By: Kagomereborn*nsi On: January 21, 2004 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's right i'm making her and it's hard work too..*sighs and then goes back* you don't want to know what I do for you fellow readers.....
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 21, 2004 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very much like your story. I am always looking for new stories to read and this one has been one of my favorites. I hope you do continue the story in some way. I would very much like to see Kagome realise her true power and finally destroy Kikyo and Naraku. I f it were me i would continue the story until Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru meet and do something be it fight or become friends. Also Have Kagome and Inuyasha have their litter and then end the story. Thats is just my opinion on an ending. You could even write a sequal with all the kids grown or something. Kabe ni mimi ari, shoji ni me ari
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