| "Walking on Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2010 15:35 CST
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Wonderful! The way the angst kind of twists things into a knot as it progresses had me really concerned for a dark ending, so I was pleasantly surprised when it all worked out. You have a great hand for writing drama. Well done!
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Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg...Wow...That story was great. I am glad that I found this when it was completed because I think I would've choked had it not been completed. This story was so tantilizing and real. It made my stomach churn when they went through their tiff's. All in all though this story deserves more than just 15 reviews..I'm tired of seeing under-reviewed stories. The deserve most of the attention. I hope to see you writing sometime soon. Great story..Bye bye
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was lucky enough to find this after it was completed, so that I could read the whole thing in one go, and I had tears in my eyes the whole time. I enjoyed this very, very much. Thank you Scribblemoose.^^
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 22:22 CDT
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MORE This is not over, either you write more, or there should be a sequel, because IT'S THAT GOOD.
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Reviewed By: NillaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good. But it's completed? I think it needs to be continued. I mean, it sort of trails off and we don't really figure out what's going on with that last person chick lady. I thought Yohji was a bit of an ass, and Aya was far too forgiving. But it was still really good!
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Reviewed By: fangrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a great story! There is going to be more right? RIGHT? Their relationship was perfectly summed up in your statement "familiar lust laced with the promise of bitter disappointment." God, I want to see them both break down and give into each other, get honest and see what happens. From the title of story and how it is so far, I can't imagine anything permenantly good could come of it, but I girl can hope. The closest so far was when Aya let Yohji have control, that was so sweet, and the lack of condom that once. So telling of his feelings, is Yohji too dense to see what Aya really feels? Yes, I know Aya barely wants to admit they are there, those feelings, and yet... sigh. I can hardly wait for more!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 22:22 CST
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yohji has so many probs...ken is such a nice guy..good chapter
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:03 CST
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urgh theyre always so unhappy! my poor boys
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 15:22 CST
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yeay!! aya has his sis!! suck it up aya n admit u love yohji if not to him atleast to urself
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 18:38 CST
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man they have to have the saddest weirdest relationship ever...great story =D
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Title: 6
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 18:11 CST
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nooo yohji and aya belong together!!
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Title: 5
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 18:08 CST
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argh aya wat r u doing!
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Title: 4
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 18:01 CST
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tsk tsk aya u almost got killed!
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Title: 3
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 17:43 CST
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aww poor omi and aya!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 22:51 CST
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ooooo luv this story =D
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