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Title: Short and Sweet
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 03, 2008 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A short and sweet story that I enjoyed, 9/10 on style of writting b/c it seemed like your story was, how do I say this?, branched off. It started as one thing, then derailed into another with a bit of a bump, but not a horrable jolting one. Overall it was a fun read and im looking forward to seeing more work from you! Till next time, Ja ne! XD
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been working my way through your archive of fics ove the past couple of days, and enjoying myself immensely. I've never seen Gundam, but your suberb characterizations and writing are making these stories very accessible. I admire how well you do hard action scenes! Terrific job, and thanks for sharing your stories.
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Reviewed By: HMM... On: September 03, 2005 20:33 CDT
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Just wanted to say that I enjoyed your story. Especially loved the first chapters. And I adore how Duo stuck with his guns at the end and didn't do anything that night. ^_~
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Reviewed By: sdw On: June 26, 2004 05:29 CDT
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nice. not too sappy towards the end. i found heero's simple words about there being no difference between physical and psychological support sweet. it's like, very clear. i've read Kracken's Shinigami's Lover before, and i think your words sort of summed up the fic. this fic is like, good. will read more of your stuff.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, what sweet thing for Heero to do. gee if only there was candle light and rose petals (gets dreamy look in her eyes). But I'm sure it'll progress to that in time. Nice story, very unique approach for Duo and He-chan to hook up.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 13:44 CST
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Wonderful. Truly exquisite writing! ^_^ It's a pity your putting it off. Characterization was perfect, expecially when dealing with Heero. Great job. ~Da Rurouni~
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Its not often when someone writes a story and I'm really needing them to do a lemon with it... but you just destroy me in that area. You give the set-up, you make the mood and end the fic. I know I'm harassing you in this, alot, but take it as a compliment. You got me wanting really bad. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 20, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sweet.
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Reviewed By: Maxwells Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero definitely fooled me and I panicked along with Duo! I loved the entire work. Great work with the POV stuff and character development. I really enjoyed your use of description when it came to the lemony part. I like 'em better when there is more left up to the reader's imagination. Please, if inspiration strikes again, write more!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 20, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great, now that Heero finally shows that there is more to him than meets the eye the fic is over. Well not so much over, but sort of droped. But hey, I can't complain as far as having the G Boys in character goes, this chapter was fluff. And I love fluff. That's why I always want to read your fics. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 16, 2003 18:02 CDT
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Sighs in relief. That was a tense chapter. Do you love making Dou suffer and in turn your readers too. The next chapter better be all fluff! Dou deserves it and after putting up with the last chapter, I think the readers do too. Update soon and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 14, 2003 20:34 CDT
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I really this fic. Keep up the good job.
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a damn decent story. Love the Wuffers! =)
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Reviewed By: mim On: September 19, 2003 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny, i liked the living crossword puzzle. |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 18, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this was very clever - i really enjoyed this 'one shot' and look forward to ~~Heero's side |
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