| "Introspection" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miscellaneous Penguin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely fanfic, m'dear. Really loved the flow of it and the style. But...I'm not too sure about lemonizing. It seems too soon. I vote have a little more action come in (maybe Anderson could make an appearance? ^^). But if you do do the lemon, don't go too overboard with it, alrighty? :D
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Title: make more of this
Reviewed By: The Jackal On: March 04, 2004 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I definetly enjoyed the idea you have about alucard and ceras having hidden feelins for eacother. And as to your question. I really wouldnt care how you do the next chapter just do it well and do it soon. I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT DAMMIT.
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Title: eeeek
Reviewed By: sneazel On: February 23, 2004 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeek! yes yes yes yes! lemon lemon! pleasey pleasey pleasey please......lemonize it! this is so good, and besides i have but one seras/alucard lemon, and it was not remotely good! i love your style of writing and methinks you'd make a GREAT lemon! this is just ASKING to be lemonized! it has lemon written all over it! *squeals* so please?
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Reviewed By: Atikkin On: February 22, 2004 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. To answer your question, do lemonize it to keep it interesting. I'm fond of AxS pairing. And hey, what the hell I know there are hardly any any of those kind of fics out there, and I get bored like hell. Grrr!!! The hybrid has spoken
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Title: ALUCARD & SERAS YAHHHH!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LEMONIZE IT LEMONIZE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I SO LOVE ALUCARD&SERAS THEY SEAM LIKE THEY'D BE THE PERFICT COUPLE!!THIS IS AN ASTONDING STORY SO FAR YOU JEST HAVE TO UPDATE SOON (or i cuold find uot where you live)*grins evily* MWHAHAHAHAHAHA.MMWWWHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVED THE FACT THAT YOU PUT A GUNS'AND ROES'ES SONG IN THE STORY i APSOLOTLY LOVE THEM. but I wuold have use'd "sweet child of mine" not "cold november rain" PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ Ja-ne!
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Reviewed By: Life in Hell On: February 07, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
go ahead and lemonize it decent story I commend you although it got a little to mushy in the end of 3rd chapter
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Reviewed By: cvzx On: January 26, 2004 01:17 CST
Comment/Review:
mmm whats everyone elses reaction
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Reviewed By: daydreamer5888 On: January 14, 2004 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care if you lemonize it, and I don't think any body else will care either, besides if they don't like it they can read something else. Any way before you do write stuff like that always put a warning at the top of the chapter for the people who don't want to read it. But personally I think you should do what ever you want! Also, keep writing you are REALLY good, the plot and the character development is excellent and you captured the attitudes of the characters really well. PLEASE write more chapters before I die of anticipation!
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Reviewed By: kemuri9635 On: December 20, 2003 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! And in answer to your question: do it! Go for the lemon! P.S. Go Arshes! Bastard!! fans unite!
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Reviewed By: -Mink_ On: December 04, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY LOVE THIS FIC U SHOULD LEMON IT hurry up and do the next capter PLEASE!!
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Title: Introspection
Reviewed By: Rokane Ree On: October 29, 2003 17:39 CST
Comment/Review:
You should do something cliche but funny. Like Integra demanding a report. Lemon toward the end in my opinon
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Reviewed By: Jezz Shirokori On: October 19, 2003 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tis a great fic. I really like the Alucard/Victoria pairing. I cant wait till your next chapter, adding the lyrics of really great songs made it even better by the way. And I dont mind lemon, just hurry with the next chapter please~
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Reviewed By: Bunny-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story...It captured me. And I love that you drew a pic to go along with it :D To answer your question, go for it! Lemonize away ^.^
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Title: spice it up
Reviewed By: devil's towergirl On: September 25, 2003 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd say : go for the lemonizing. Some are afraid it can kill a story's spirit, but if you do it right it can enhance it's power atleast tenfold. The fic will most definitely be read by even more people.
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Reviewed By: Dragonlover On: September 11, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finaly a AlacandxCeres fanfic you must wirte more it was terific :( Please :( !!!!!!!!! |
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