| "Hypnotize the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: BuddhaStar On: October 09, 2003 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, explain my ratings . . . I loved your ideas about making Vamps more predatory, I've always thought of them that way as well. Your story was very original while sticking to the theme of FAKE (One of my Fav animes). THe overall rating . . . I'm just very critical, sorry. I'm even critical of my own writing. *sigh* I wouldn't rate myself as high as I would others. ANyway, I really enjoyed this, and you did a great job with the lemon, especially how you combined their predatory natures into it;) (I'm a bit of a masochist). I found it cool how you kept to the characters' personalities . . . better than some of the fics who don't write AUs. I really liked this!!!! MorningStar (Part of the fanfic writing duo known as BuddhaStar)
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Reviewed By: ThisismeRS On: October 05, 2003 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate this...Leaving a review just to see all of my reviews...
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 19:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh god love the Fic! It's such a hot fic! Thank You for the last chappie... But just because there was double the fun doesn't mean I'll let you off that easily... WRITE MORE! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: EiriYukiNoBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI...I just wanted to say I liked it...
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Reviewed By: ANIMEgirlDUO On: September 29, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOO! hello 2-fer! seriously that's the first time i've read 2-fer for Dee and Ryo and it was HOOOOOT!! *claps* wonderfull; extremely enjoyable ^_^
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Title: isukichan
Reviewed By: Isukichan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 05:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
woohoo!!!!!!!!!!!!! more can't wait to see the next chapter!great chapter. ciao
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job!! Talk about HOTTT!!
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Title: Scalding
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 15:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
The building tension and anticipation are hot, hot, hot!
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Reviewed By: Isukichan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you can't stop now!! you just can't!! *whine*
it's...it's inhuman to stop now!!! cliffhanger!!
write more and soon!! heh heh^*grin*
ciao |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 14:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying what you've done here, the attraction/repulsion between the two characters. I was surprised to see Penguin in this chapter. You could do a lot more with this fiction. |
Title: Rekka...
Reviewed By: I didn't feel like signing in so this is Maetel On: September 18, 2003 12:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Rekka, I am gonna kill you if you don't update soon!!! I wanna read the next chapter. Please hurry and post it... *begs* *offers up Angel Sanctuary* *offers up Hakkai and Heero... well not Hakkai* |
Reviewed By: lrn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 11:21 CDT
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Great!! Really great!!! I love your fanfic. Please write the next chappie!!!!!!!!!!
See you next chapter ^^
la rose noire |
Reviewed By: Isukichan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 03:07 CDT
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write more!! I love vampire stories, especially this one!!! ^-^
I'm looking forward to read the next chapter.
update soon!!
ciao |
Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: September 13, 2003 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy..and if i wernt so tired..i'd read it a second time..look forward to reading your next chapter!! good luck!!! |
Reviewed By: Maetel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, Rekka!!
I am loving this fic already. Update ASAP please!!!!! Do it or I'll steal Kouga!!!!
Peace and many sugar rushes,
-Maetel |
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