Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice start! I hope you can add more to this soon! Each of the characters is already well fleshed out and interesting. The writing is engaging and full of funny touches! Me like!
I don't land on either side of the Relena debate, but I do like what you've done with her here (she's a notoriously hard character to write I bet), I'm looking forward to see your 5+R develop.
Now if you'll excuse me, I'll go batten down hatches, as I feel a storm of romantic tension coming up in the next chapters (which I hope to see soon!)... |
