| "Changing Interrogation Methods" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: a-o On: November 14, 2003 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude whoopee for u but that just aint right duos my fave character i dont want him to be gay!!!*cries in the background* ariel
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Reviewed By: tari56 On: November 11, 2003 20:02 CST
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ooh that was good but what you just cant say what happen to wufei
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 10, 2003 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Were have you ben ? Well I'm glad to see your back ... Know if we can just keep you updating... Well you did a good job on this chapter so know you left us wanting more sooo please update again soon...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Hieislover1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 00:22 CDT
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Why was Wu-man blushing? *confused* More please.
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Reviewed By: dostil On: October 17, 2003 21:35 CDT
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how can you¡¡¡¡¡¡ say what happen between heero and wufei
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 16, 2003 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Duo dose not get his fealings hert ...Wuwei can tell Duo loves Heero... If Wufei dose something to mess that up you will be a mean person ... LOL I hope everything turns out for the best and I will keep reading you got me hooked I've got to see what come next ...TTFN
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Reviewed By: aki the great On: October 16, 2003 19:23 CDT
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me like -grumble- longer chapters would be greatly apreciated but so far it speachy keen jelly bean
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Title: Bettee
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 07, 2003 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did so much better on this chapter... I'm really enjoying this story ..It is so sweet and I look foward to reading more so keep up the good work and update soon...
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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So that is how you work? Black mailing to get your reviews? *mumble dirty mumble cheat mumble mumble* HA HA HA I hope this is enough for you. Updates are a good part of a healthy diet. Lemons are also a nice source of vitimans too. *wink wink*
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: Patty40 On: October 01, 2003 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reviewed in ff.net
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Reviewed By: nekoi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
humm the first one i don't really mind for the second it could be eitjer with zech or sally and for heero and duo 2x1 2x1 2x1 |
Reviewed By: tarig On: September 18, 2003 18:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
1. gundam pilots
2. wiht sally po
i like the history i hope you finish it soon |
Title: My vote
Reviewed By: Sundaire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Question #1: Umm, could go either way, but the boys as Gundam Pilots seems to fit better with this story.
Question #2: Definitely NOT C. Ugh. Wufei with Sally or Zechs is so much better. Sally if they're Gundam Pilots and Zechs if they're Preventers. That works perfectly, right? Let Duo and Heero have their own little 2-person love nest. Besides, with the way Heero acted in chapter 1 when Duo was going to be violated, Wufei doesn't even fit in the equation.
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: SeYa On: September 15, 2003 23:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Question 1. Preventers
Question 2. d.) sounds good to me
Can't wait to see which way you decide to go. |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 23:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
1. Do you want the G-boys to still be Gundam Pilots or should they work for the Preventers? Definetly Gundam Pilots. ^_^ Hehe.
2. There will definitely be a 1+2 in the story, but what about the others?
I thought about 3+4. My problem now is, what should I do with our poor Wufei??? I don't want him to be
the only one without a beloved one.
Here are my possibilitys I suggest:
c.) He will get two cute boyfriends called Duo and Heero... yeah you heard right here!!
I like a little spice added to life. ^_^
Good story, btw! I hope I helped a bit!! ^^ |
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