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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 08:54 CDT
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Duo is a baaaad patient. *snickers* Are Heero and Zech going to play doctor? Tell Duo to turn his head and cough? ;-P. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: katdrolie On: May 01, 2005 04:18 CDT
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WOOHOO!!! You're writing this again! Coolness!
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Title: Media Hype
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 01:02 CDT
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There's no way I can say anything about the amount of time it took to post this chapter - I'm just glad you're continuing with this fic! Doesn't sound like any of the three knows what the heck's going on, but they each have found some semblance of comfort from the others in the situation. Heero seems to be carrying the most weight in this chapter - monitoring Duo and all his medical problems and handling the brunt of the tactical issues. So, how prophetic are the Guardians of Gaia? ;) It'll be interesting to see what's uncovered in the further examination of the facility; I hope they'll discover some of the items that are immediately needed so the urgent visit to the caretaker/town can be avoided for at least awhile. Thanks for sticking with this one Sweetie - I know it's been a tough time for you.
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: April 30, 2005 23:20 CDT
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This is such an excellent fic. It only took me a couple of paragraphs to remember it and I was more than a little excited that it was being continued. The only criticism I can come up with is for how long it's taken you to update. I hope this posting is a sign that you've taken some interest in it once more and that we'll have another update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sozoku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice fic ya got here. I like the way things are turning out. (Sigh)Usually people would already have them having sex together. I'm glad you didn't do that and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 23:37 CST
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It was great to see a new chapter posted Xe! I think Zechs handled his hangover fairly well, considering the arrival of his unexpected guests. It was pretty sad to read all that Heero went through; I could just imagine the shitty doctors treating the celebrity instead of the patient. I love how you calmly interspersed the notion of killing while Heero was talking with Zechs and later ruminating on the situation. One can never be too paranoid, ne? : ) Raven's right - Duo is just too precious, even when half of his body is burned up!
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 damn mm.o won't let me sign in! On: March 31, 2004 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zechs has already fallen under the ol' Maxwell charm, eh? Hee hee. Who could resist? Even when wounded, he's adorable! I expected to find a nutso Heero in this chapter, but was really happy to see that he's not really crazy, just suffering from conditions that he should rightfully have after the terrible life he's led. I'm rather intrigued about what happened at Preventers that made him quit so abruptly. I liked the exchange between Heero and Zechs, both cautious of each other, but still holding a lot of respect for the other. Neither of them seemed to hold grudges over what had occurred in the past. They could have been a couple of snarling, vicious wolves circling each other, but you made them mature men. I really liked that. Can't wait for four!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Fire of phoenix On: February 19, 2004 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is the second time i've read this story and it is fanbloodytastic! this is the first story i've read that was centered on Zechs and i think it's great so far. i can't wait to see how you introduce the 6x2(x1). good luck with that!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 (2 lazy to log in) On: October 15, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... fantastic start... I am already enthralled. Thanks for telling us about this fic... I would have missed it otherwise.
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Title: Chapter Duo ~snerk~
Reviewed By: Shinigami_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your usual brilliance, Xe!! I adored the beginning of this chapter...the humor surrounding Zech's suffering was hilarious! I loved his annoyance with the seagulls, and his apathetic readying of himself for his uninvited guests. ^__^ The reason for the boys arriving there was great, although I admit it would have been much more satisfying had Duo related that something "tragic" had befallen Relena during the incident. Too bad she got away unscathed. ~sigh~ I do like the plot line that Earth was giving the pilots the boot because they were afraid of them, and loved that Duo's blood made Heero snap. I hope you get more out on the actual event from Heero's POV, I think you could explore the incident a little more in depth than Duo's narrative. Give Heero's side of what made him lose it, why the blood spattering on his face made him react so violently. Knowing you, I'm certain that you will!! I'm enjoying the dynamic between Zechs and Duo, I STILL haven't hit the 6x2 archive, so this is really only the second fic I've read with this particular pairing as the focus. I wish I could think of the first one that I'd read to rec to you, it was REALLY fantastic, but you've probably read it already anyway! ~.^ Looking forward to chapter three!!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 10:17 CDT
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Nicely written (that's rare enough these days, sigh), and a good description of the characters. I can just see the scene at the garden party. I think you're going to write us a very interesting Heero...I've not read many Zechs fics but this is looking good already. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with anticipation.
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Title: Thought I already reviewed this...
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeppers! Gawd damn Zechs is one sexy bitch. It's about time he got another story.
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: September 23, 2003 11:58 CDT
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yoo..when ya gona write more??????
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Reviewed By: jaya18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 06:50 CDT
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This started out very intresting. I can't wait to see how you continue it. |
Title: lickable sexy Zechesy
Reviewed By: bakayaro onna On: September 13, 2003 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A beautiful introspective piece of our favorite Lightning Court bishie. I do like Zeches a lot, a complex chara who is not cranky for a change.
Looking forward to more! |
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