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Title: Chapter Duo ~snerk~
Reviewed By: Shinigami_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your usual brilliance, Xe!! I adored the beginning of this chapter...the humor surrounding Zech's suffering was hilarious! I loved his annoyance with the seagulls, and his apathetic readying of himself for his uninvited guests. ^__^ The reason for the boys arriving there was great, although I admit it would have been much more satisfying had Duo related that something "tragic" had befallen Relena during the incident. Too bad she got away unscathed. ~sigh~ I do like the plot line that Earth was giving the pilots the boot because they were afraid of them, and loved that Duo's blood made Heero snap. I hope you get more out on the actual event from Heero's POV, I think you could explore the incident a little more in depth than Duo's narrative. Give Heero's side of what made him lose it, why the blood spattering on his face made him react so violently. Knowing you, I'm certain that you will!! I'm enjoying the dynamic between Zechs and Duo, I STILL haven't hit the 6x2 archive, so this is really only the second fic I've read with this particular pairing as the focus. I wish I could think of the first one that I'd read to rec to you, it was REALLY fantastic, but you've probably read it already anyway! ~.^ Looking forward to chapter three!!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 10:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nicely written (that's rare enough these days, sigh), and a good description of the characters. I can just see the scene at the garden party. I think you're going to write us a very interesting Heero...I've not read many Zechs fics but this is looking good already. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with anticipation.
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Title: Thought I already reviewed this...
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yeppers! Gawd damn Zechs is one sexy bitch. It's about time he got another story.
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: September 23, 2003 11:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
yoo..when ya gona write more??????
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Reviewed By: jaya18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 06:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
This started out very intresting. I can't wait to see how you continue it. |
Title: lickable sexy Zechesy
Reviewed By: bakayaro onna On: September 13, 2003 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A beautiful introspective piece of our favorite Lightning Court bishie. I do like Zeches a lot, a complex chara who is not cranky for a change.
Looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: anna.m On: September 13, 2003 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was incredible but no surprise there . Everything you write is just ... excelent. To tell you the truth I'm not that big of a GW fan ,it's not that it isn't good just that right now I'm a total WK addict and that doesn't leave much space for anything else, but I would always read your storys , no matter what they are about, because I know I'm not going to be disapointed. |
Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: September 13, 2003 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
more please???? |
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