| "The Sin of Regret" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 14:34 CDT
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Oooh, ok, things look like they're starting to move forward ^_^ good chapter by the way. Although, it does get scary when Yusuke starts thinking haha.
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Reviewed By: Kurama no Miko2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 21:39 CDT
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Poor Kurama! I like the idea you have going . . . but I'd also like to see why, as in, what were the choices he should have made to avoid the problem, and the like. Just a thought. Oh, and Hiei's going to go to the Ningenkai, right? He's not just going to leave Kurama there in pain, is he? ~Kurama no Miko2003
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Reviewed By: kirei kitsune On: September 26, 2003 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like this one so far. It's intriguing. :) Keep writing pleeease ^_^
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awww... poor Kurama. Hiei's gonna drive himself slightly nuts for a bit till he gives in?? Hmmmm... something he's had a chance to fix but never made the right choice huh? Phffft ... that could be bout anything with Youko's past. Ah well ^_^ I'll sit back and wait and see where this one goes. As far as the "twists and turns" comment, technically, that's a good thing ^_~ being able to come up with something out of left field that is. I look forward to updates!!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 05:32 CDT
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ahhhh... I remember you now! You're the writer that has bizarre twists and turns that come up out of left feild. :must remember to watch out for sucker punches: ^_~ Interesting so far. Would like to see more of the story. Will keep my eyes open for updates ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sunshine Angel On: September 14, 2003 04:01 CDT
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Wahhhh! T_T Kurama's in pain!!! the poor poor boy! don't make him suffer too long k? ^^ I really like the story so far, but it was so short! *chants* MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! AND SOON TOO!! ^____^ keep up the great work! update soon! |
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