| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Harder Inu-Yasha On: November 18, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant wait for next chap
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Reviewed By: DragonFireMeltedMyBones On: November 18, 2003 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whats the tune of your sex song?
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Reviewed By: TheREALMe On: November 18, 2003 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
this story is why virgins with bad spelling and grammar should NOT write lemons
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny -N- MissNikki On: November 18, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
We want the whole SONG!!!! PLEASE!! and update too!!! Please!
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf7 On: November 17, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleas write more
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Title: operation sex
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice.^_^ You should*if at all posible* up-date more! I love the story! I think I'm going to tell my friends about you! Love the fic, and please up-date soooooooon! Please!?>!?!?
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Reviewed By: ho hum On: November 15, 2003 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
very funny but please get a beta reader your spelling and grammar are awful
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your latest chappies and they were great. oh and that Dislexia thing, i completly understand because i have it to. i know it can get hard when you have it and people are telling you that you can't spell, i wouldn't worry about it. you know, the easiest phone # to remember are the ones written the same way forward and backwards, anyway. Update soon, k!! W.T.P. -^__^-
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Reviewed By: wildmonkeygirl On: November 13, 2003 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry with the next chappie and like my friend lemonqueen said lemonnnn!
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Reviewed By: lemonqueen On: November 13, 2003 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it but i want more lemonnnnnn i nedd more lemonnnnn!
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Reviewed By: Ericyamaha89 On: November 13, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write next cahappie soon
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Reviewed By: niastyle On: November 13, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the worst story I ever read. To be honest, I didn't even finish it. I got up to about chapter 4 before I was so fed up and disgusted I had to stop reading. You have the worst spelling and grammer. If you use spell check, check to see what word your replacing before you replace it. Half of the words didn't even make sense. And when you write a story please leave your comments out of the middle of the story. It's hard to get into a story when it keeps being interrupted with stupid unnecessary comments. If you want to make comments, make them at the end of the chapter in a summary. And next time try writing in complete sentences.
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Title: powerrrrr!
Reviewed By: bankutsoluv On: November 12, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the bomd diggity bomb keep going.
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Reviewed By: fluffysexy On: November 12, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the best yet!!!!! i luv fluffly
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Reviewed By: sweetiepie^_^! On: November 12, 2003 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so funny! inu has power!
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