| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: omgforgotmymmname On: November 28, 2012 11:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story to no end. Coconut Tree lyrics was made for this (please don't take this as an insult if you don't like that song ) |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2011 21:34 EDT
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LOVED IT! Seriously, really good story.... Love your writing..... |
Reviewed By: bf_91 On: January 31, 2010 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!! I had meant to start reading when it first came out but I never got the chance *snioker..chance* after some mishaps with internet. I finally started reading it through my phones browser bout a week ago and I had to finish it online now that I have internet access again!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this story and I hope to read more of your work when Im finished reading the other ffs im reading (all SessKag). I hope your doing great! and late congratualtins on your engagement. XD Thank you for the entertainment -bf_91
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Reviewed By: Lady Sianna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 05:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a lovely story. I like the originality you were able to inject into the plot, and the rollercoaster of ups and downs the story took. I don't know if you are still writing, but I would certainly be interested in reading more of your works. Also, I know it has been more than a year, but you have my condolences on the passing of your grandmother. I lost my favorite aunt in 2006 and I know that even with the passage of time, we tend to feel the absence our loved ones leave behind. I hope things are better now and that you are coping well.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 18:30 EDT
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Yay...*cough* I finaly checked my e-mail...hehe its ummmm.....been awail...hehe....but I just love this fic I'm so glad that I get to read the end even if it has been a while...hehe......I still remember the story.....I love it soooo....XD.....ya know I was almost certain that it would have been Kagome to almost die...but I think I might like this more...its closer to the Beauty and the Beast story....hehe.....I'm so glad that all worked out for them....but now Kagome has to find a dog that is as smart a Sesshoumaru...as a dog....not an easy task....hehe.....love the ending too bad Sesshoumaru doesn't get to keep Rin...hehe ...oh well I'm sure he will be get his own childen soon enough...hehe.................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 18:29 EDT
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Yay...*cough* I finaly checked my e-mail...hehe its ummmm.....been awail...hehe....but I just love this fic I'm so glad that I get to read the end even if it has been a while...hehe......I still remember the story.....I love it soooo....XD.....ya know I was almost certain that it would have been Kagome to almost die...but I think I might like this more...its closer to the Beauty and the Beast story....hehe.....I'm so glad that all worked out for them....but now Kagome has to find a dog that is as smart a Sesshoumaru...as a dog....not an easy task....hehe.....love the ending too bad Sesshoumaru doesn't get to keep Rin...hehe ...oh well I'm sure he will be get his own childen soon enough...hehe.................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 10:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was beautifully written and I loved reading ever word of it. You give life to these characters in all your stories; I enjoy all your works. I can't wait to get back to your other stories as well.
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Reviewed By: Little Red On: October 29, 2008 22:41 EDT
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Very anti-climactic ending I thought... You kinda got lazy there towards the end... I stopped reading it before, but I couldnt remember why, so I found my place and finished it... And Im proud to say that I have. But the beginning is infinately better than then end...
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 18:38 EDT
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Whenever a great story ends, I'm always a little sad and yet if it's well written, it gives me a sense of completion. I have that sense of completion. Excellent job; I found this fic almost four years ago and I have enjoyed it ever since. You have great writing skills and ideas. Congratulations on your wedding--I wish you both the best happiness in this world and the next! Smile, life is beautiful. Thank you for sharing your talent with me.
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Reviewed By: gradualwisd0m [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. Got some teary moments there but it was all in all very nice :)
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 20:27 EDT
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Beautiful ending. IT all tied up so well!!!
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Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen -not logged in- On: October 17, 2008 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! I do love the story. I do think that any waiting was worth it. It was really good! Happy wedding for you as well!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 11:17 EDT
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This was really good! I liked it so much! This is such a great story! I'm glad that you managed to quickly put in all of the other characters at the end. InuYasha was funny! I love it when that kinda stuff happens! This was such a fabulous story! HAPPY WRITINGS!!!
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Reviewed By: beckyducky not logged in On: October 17, 2008 09:27 EDT
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OMG I LOVED THE ENDING!!!! I ABSOLUTELY MISSED THE STORY!!! Congratulations on marriage and also sorry for your loss. But overall a wonderful fic. I think i would have liked a bit more adjusting on Kagome's part (as in adjusting to Sesshoumaru's demonyness...) but creative license was taken and therefore it's your choice. I must say it did not detract from the overall tone of the fic. I loved Chapter 39 when it was the story retold. Omigosh i thought i was going to cry. It was like a flashback from Tales from the House of the Moon. With the lord and the priestess again (except it was a princess this time...) so i was hoping that the little girl in the last chapter was Kag's and sess's daughter...but it was rin and she was happy. The growth of sesshoumaru is very apparent in the fic (which is love!) i loved the last line as well. But again - i think a bit more of Kagome in the ending was needed. (Please dont take this as a flame) I hope you continue A Kiss for the Prince. I havent read 1000 yet. But am going to. Just needed to review before i die of non expression. Everything came around full circle and i'm happy it ended. (What happened to that one last lemon? lol) okay...so sayonara!!
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224isnotloggedin On: October 17, 2008 07:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, I have really enjoyed this story. Congrats on finishing it. Throws streamers and does a happy dance.
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