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| "Contemplation Indigo" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: Good
Reviewed By: Hikaru Itsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hello!!!!! this fic really really is pretty good and interesting, I read all the chapters between yesterday and today, in some parts I almost cry, poor Wuffi, I hope everything turns out fine, but hey the fic got all it needs to be great, so I hope you update as soon as you can!!
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, heh. I actually feel a little sorry for Treize, having to always put up with Wufei's temper, it's got to be real hard for him. If that was me I'd have run a mile away. But that's what makes the two so perfect for eachother, the fact that Trieze is willing to put up with Wufei and the fact that Wufei doesn't always mean what he says. I also adore Duo and Heero in this. It's rare I like reading about them, but it really touched me when Duo said they'd had to be strong for Treize. *the constipation* haw haw haw. YAY! Happier times are here!!!
| Title: Hi There Girlfriend
Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 17:21 CST
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As usual I love the way you write Treize. He's honourable and the perfect man and I'm glad he got his reward in the end, getting to make love to Wufei after so many months of celebracy. He's so caring it's sweet.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH21) On: February 13, 2005 16:41 CST
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You know, I loved that line about why have a dog if you're gonna bark yourself. Though you, of course, phrased it a lot better. But still, it had me in complete stitches. I mean, come on, it's so totally true, why do you have to rinse off the dishes if you're gonna put them into the dishwasher. lol. Sometimes Heero's logic is so practical it's impossible to argue with it. lol again. You know, this comes a pretty second close, but I still think Heero finding the ring is the most romantic thing he's ever done. But again, I must stress, it comes a *very*, close second. Oh yeah, I never thought about putting in my email address but since you're interested it's doreeFT @ hotmail.com (just take out the spaces, I don't want spam is all)
| Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 16:47 CST
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I really love this story please update soon!!
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH20) On: February 11, 2005 16:22 CST
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Well, you know my thoughts for this chapter. In fact, because of this chapter you got me into the whole fic in the first place. All I can say is that this is a brilliant fic and all those lazy reviewers out there should get typing! I cannot absolutely wait for an update! Thank you so much for such lovely writing.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH19) On: February 11, 2005 16:21 CST
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Finally, the last one! I made it! I thought I wouldn't but here I am! I hope you don't mind me writing all these reviews. For all I know, I could be jamming your inbox. Not sure how it works but... yeah... I don't think it's poor Sally's fault for Wufei's condition. In fact, I think that she did everything possible in her power, so yeah, good for her. And I'm happy Treize could also see that. Because I've already read chapter 20 I know Wufei's gonna be alright so yay!!! Hip, hip, horray (can't work out how to spell that for the life of me)!!!
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH18) On: February 11, 2005 16:18 CST
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What a funny chapter. Crows feet. What the!!! Tee, hee, hee. Heero's reaction was just priceless. Loved it how he chased the bird around the garden to get it to do its courtship display. Yeah right! Like that's gonna work. lol. I'm also happy that Wufei is finally going to tell Treize of his fears.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH17) On: February 11, 2005 16:16 CST
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The night before the wedding! Classic. Sometimes I really love Duo and his traditions. Too good. Too good. Not good for their health obviously, but good for the reader and all the other g-boys. Yep, too good.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH16) On: February 11, 2005 16:14 CST
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I'm nearly there, nearly reached chapter twenty. Man, I never realised it took so much effort to reread each chapter and to write a review for each one. Still, it's worth it because now I can see that at this particular moment you have nineteen reviews. I want the whole world to know of this brilliant story, and the more reviews it has, the more people are likely to read it. I think the summary of this story was what put me off reading it at the beginning. It didn't really tell me much, no main pairings, nothing. Anyway, chapter 16... I like how it's once again Sally's viewpoint. (only because i get to see more Wufei). I love the friendly rapport they have and I'm happy that Wufei now feels that Sally and Treize are friends. Yep, a very lovely chapter.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH15) On: February 11, 2005 16:07 CST
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I know it's not nice to like seeing Treize so angry, but I like it because it shows that Treize cares. I really liked that line where Wufei gets angry all the time (bluster really) but he can count on one hand the number of times he's actually been angry, I mean, really angry at Wufei. Still, it's good to know he obviously cares (as if we didn't) and it all worked out fine in the end. Wufei was just lucky someone didn't kidnap him in his moment of weakness.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH14) On: February 11, 2005 16:04 CST
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I really liked how Treize explained to Wufei how their wedding took place so that even though he can't remember it, he can still imagine it. I'm also very, very, very happy they are going to have anothe wedding. It's just too funny how Treize is so powerful he can give his beloved anything he wants. Yep, I think Treize has created a monster. And yes, very honourable that man is.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH13) On: February 11, 2005 16:02 CST
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I love Secret Santa, it's my all time favourite game, though over here we called it Kris Kringle. Don't ask me why, it doesn't mean anything to me, but I'm sure somewhere out there in the world, those two words do mean something to someone else. Otherwise why would it be so named Kris Kringle. Good thing there was a cap for the amount spent or gods know how much money would have been poured into the gift. I loved all the gifts but I especially liked the one Duo gave Wufei, and I think Quatre's gift to Treize was also very fitting.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH12) On: February 09, 2005 06:25 CST
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Another beautiful and sweet chapter. Trowa wonders what he did to deserve beautiful sweet Quatre, but I'm sure Quatre often wonders the same thing. They are perfect for eachother.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH11) On: February 09, 2005 06:24 CST
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Liked it how Wufei tried to make Treize jealous. True, doesn't matter if the nurse is good looking since Wufei shouldn't be looking. Still... I was really worried that when the bandages came off Wufei wouldn't be able to see, but of course he could. He is one of the main characters. Yep, I'm happy he's going to get his vision back.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH10) On: February 09, 2005 06:22 CST
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lol. I'd really like to see Duo and Heero go to councelling. Boy would that be an experience. Somehow, I just cannot imagine it.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH9) On: February 08, 2005 08:23 CST
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I really liked getting Wufei's view point on his friends and husband. As much as I love Wufei, he's a complex character and can be hard to understand. But you wrote him so well. His fears were written so well that it made me feel really sympathetic. Still, I'm crossing my fingers and hoping for a happy ending for him.
| Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend (CH8) On: February 08, 2005 08:21 CST
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Ha ha. I just loved the line where Duo said that Trowa could go and build his character. Yeah right. Poor Trowa. Oh poor Trowa. And I guess poor Quatre too. And the whole Trowa and Duo waxing thing. Yeah, I think Duo would need a piece of leather to bite on. LOL.
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