| "Mission: Can you win his heart?" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Holy Kamoly On: September 30, 2003 18:13 CDT
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Noooooooooo! no. no. no. no. you can't. you musn't. you won't. but you will. I order you not to. your evil. please. don't. no. don't. stop. continue. ok. thanks. you just can't do this.
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Reviewed By: Kirikou-chan On: September 29, 2003 18:00 CDT
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Wow, another great fic. Mesus putting you on favourite list, hope you update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 28, 2003 11:57 CDT
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and the plot thickens -more please
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Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
C'mon bring on the ryou/bakura. I like it by the way.
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Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 05:46 CDT
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Reviewed By: Zinx On: September 24, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, Shadow you a junoir or a senior ? You know high school ... sorta figuered it out by what ya write well anyways tell me if I'm wrong when you write your next chp. Don't even bother to look for an e-mail mum won't let me have one ~snif snif~ By any chance do you take japanese as an elective course ? (I do.) Domo arigatoo gozaimasu for the great stories .Kaite kudasai soon (Go easy on me with the grammar it my first year be so kind to help me correct it okay ? )
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Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 17:06 CDT
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Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 24, 2003 07:07 CDT
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ahh how sweet = is Malik the bad guy >.
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Reviewed By: YugiMama On: September 23, 2003 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story ROCKS!! I never though of Yami in that way but......*Yami in black silk boxers* YUM! OK, i know he's a cartoon character, but he's still a hottie. and his voice. *swoons* I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: September 19, 2003 16:26 CDT
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mmmm.... yami chest *drools* sorry^^;;;; good story ya got started here^^ well, that's all igot so far, jaa ne |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 19, 2003 11:43 CDT
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more please - i'm really enjoying this |
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 03:31 CDT
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Man, you just gave me a totally different view on Yami! I imagined him in my mind and he's like, totally sexy now!!!! good work!! keep going! |
Reviewed By: Holy Kamoly On: September 15, 2003 21:02 CDT
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that was great I simply adored it. I need an update, pleasssssseeeeee. That was simply wonderful, I think I've just found a new favorite story. |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 00:52 CDT
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Oooo..I like this fic! Very cool! Nice different setting and such. Definitely continue! |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 14, 2003 19:20 CDT
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that was a mean way to leave that chapter - hurry and post more soon - please |
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