| "SUPRISE!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miss Pocky Lover On: September 15, 2003 19:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHA! Ok I have to admit that was funny I never saw it coming gum! ::rolls eyes::ok bye now! |
Reviewed By: Paragorgon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
by the Gods. that was funny. |
Title: ch 1
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*laughs* That was a very fun ending! Way to go! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 02:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
funny...to bad for you I read the second ending first...or I might have been mad ;) |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 00:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
You name it under the genre hentai and expect us not to have hentai thoughts? *piercing stare* Anyways in was good. I liked it. Well writen and the twist at the end was funny. He pulled her closer to get a better whiff. Wonder what he thought it was before he knew it was gum. Hey! How does he know what gum is? Hmmmm...How did it get in her hair?
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Reviewed By: Laydhwk On: September 14, 2003 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You big silly!!!!! *grins* Yea, I'll hafta admit.....you got me on that one! That was one hell of a build up you had there!....*still grin'n!* HA! |
Reviewed By: Just Fujicakes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! YOU RULE! GO MEE!! WOOHOO! KEEP IT UP!! ...im such a loser.. |
Reviewed By: Nemisis On: September 14, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*raises one eyebrow* ooookkkkkaaaayyy... that was... ...different...and evil |
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