| "The Loss of a Child" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2009 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok...so I have read all three of your fanfic and by the way THEY ARE SOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now my confusing part is, are you going to continue or is this it? Like what happened to Sesshomaru's trial and the others????
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Reviewed By: nanatsunade On: February 27, 2009 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm giving this a "10", becuz I've read the entire series in 2 days..IT WAS THAT GOOD!!!! SOooo...where's "Trial..."??? I kinda got left hanging with Seisho and Inuyasha getting arrested, and I really hate that...:( Plz, where is it???
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Reviewed By: Suzu_ On: November 08, 2004 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love parts one and two and even this side story! ^_^I can't wait for the trial but it is past the whole MONTH of october. Did you forget about your reviewers. *Sniff* its o.k Just keep up the good work and UPDATE ASAP! ^_~
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Reviewed By: TaiyoukaiKuzumeoftheeasternlands [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 02:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! nice chapter, PLEASE UPDATE! Thanks! ^^
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart21 On: September 24, 2004 19:27 CDT
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Baby Kagome is so cute! It is good to know more about who Kagome really is. I was wondering about the whole "She's not my reincarnation" thing Kikyo said. I am on to read the last part in this trilogy now!
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Title: Great tie up
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great way to tie up the UA stories, and explain some stuff. Love the UA Trilogy.
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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 21:20 CST
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CiCi: grr you haven't update this yet! wait! is this the only chappy? ohhhhhhhhhhhh i get it now...haha! Miroku: {::bored to death::} CiCi can i just- CiCi: NO! {::for the whole story on this event goto TBW, then Trial, then now....haha!:::}
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Reviewed By: NightChild01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you such high ratings because I love your writing. I have read most of your fics on ff.net--I would have reviewed on ff.net but my computer really, really hates javascript pop-ups--anyway, I love, totally 100% love, UA and "To Bare"...they're wonderful fics and I love reading them. You're going on my favorite author's list here and on ff.net. NC01
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmm. Yes, that ties up a few things, but now, there are new questions to be asked. Assuming that the woman is Sesshoumaru's mother, that would mean he would have had a full demon sibling had it not been killed. Ok, pure speculation on my part. How often do you plan on updating Trial? Every day? I know wishful thinking. Well, see you in a few weeks. TTFN |
Title: hmmmm....
Reviewed By: filialunae618 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 18:37 CDT
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hehehe i really hopes this makes blue font lol... anyone not the reason im here is it! im kinda wonderin where this fits into the 'allies story, which is great :) but so is this, idn i like ur writing style... but keep writing plz! i think i give up on fanfics altogether if u stopped lol! but im a starting writer.. if u have any hints that might help my pathetic attempts... email me (ayakumi5188@aol.com) but keep up the good work!! (i really hope these stupid tags things worked lol!!~aya |
Reviewed By: Curtainbreakr213 On: September 15, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey SF! I've read most of your storys, and your one of my favorite authors on Mediaminer.org! I cant wait until 'Trial' comes out! you I cant belive you end 'chosen like that! Right after the confessions! I'm so syced for the next part! i ca nt wait to find out what Sessy did! well, i'll be waiting untill the first week of octorber! 'the lose of a child' is great! I cant wait untill the next chapter, but it is kind of confusing. o well i'll tryo to understand it better next time! BYE! |
Reviewed By: TT (Tsukitani) On: September 15, 2003 09:04 CDT
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Yes, I, too, am too lazy to log in.
Come on now...everyone together: "AWWWWWWW. Chibi Sess is so cute!"
So, the question in my mind is not 'who was the taiyoukai with Sesshoumaru', but 'who was the female inuyoukai who has been sealed away?' Hmmm...let me think...is this how Sess's mother was taken from him? Sounds plausible, but you always manage to throw me for a loop, so...who knows? I guess I'll just have to wait until Trial begins to find out, eh? (But I have to warn you...I don't do 'patient' very well!When I get cranky, I'm liable to grow my own claws and fangs to get what I want. Just ask Sess's bum! *snicker*) In other words, I look forward to Trial! |
Title: Just wanted to say...
Reviewed By: Helen On: September 15, 2003 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is the first time I review for one of your fics so please bare with me. First, I'd like to congratulate you for writing such an original piece. Way cool if you ask me. Also, I love the fact that you are always so diligent in posting your stories in both mediaminer and fanfiction. Finally, I'd like to ask you a question pertaining to how many souls Kagome was born with? I might have missed it but was she born with Midoriko's and Narasa's daughter soul? Anyway, thanks again for updating so quickly. Can't wait for October. Ja ne. |
