| "Experiment B-U-R-U-M-A" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: November 09, 2003 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You might have a lot of time on your hands but you spend it well! This is a great story
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Reviewed By: princesscatgirl On: November 08, 2003 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thats prity good fanfic im looking fowerd for the next chapter hope to see you soon
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Reviewed By: NSB On: November 08, 2003 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
HOW DARE U LEAVE ME LIKE THIS!!! DAMN IT! NO LEMON! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! YAYYYY!! OK CONTINUE BEFORE I DIEEEEEEE!!! UPPPPPDATEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! LATER!!
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Reviewed By: Audra On: November 06, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo soo good! Please keep writing more!
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Reviewed By: Death_Phonix On: October 23, 2003 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it, i can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I WANT MY LEMON! IM READY IM READYY!!!! KEEP THOSE CHAPPYS ON COMING!!!! UPDATEEEE IM DYIN TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT LATER!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, another kick ass chapter. Your story is so great, I can't wait until the next chapter. Please hurry!!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was kick ass. Please update soon, I'll be waiting.
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Reviewed By: babyblueeyes On: October 07, 2003 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool lemon (even tho it woz rape) still good tho hope u update soon
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Reviewed By: Louise On: September 24, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. That was quite the lemon... Eventhough it's rape. I can understand why you would feel ashamed writing that, but don't worry, you did a great job. And please update soon! =)
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, and if any authors out there are in need of a beta reader, contact me at theoujismate@yahoo.com. C Ya Manda
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story. I hope Vegita comes back soon to "save the day". A little sloppy, but good for a first story.
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Title: cool fic
Reviewed By: worshipvegeta On: September 21, 2003 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thta was good keep writing more k |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: September 19, 2003 06:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW Cool lemon even though it was rape it was well done so its ok dont feel ashamed. UPDATE SOON PLEASE! I wanna know if shes ok and what will happen to vege-chan .
Its Nsbvegeta but some ass wipe has taken my name so u see this is why I used NSBVEGE
LATER! MORE LEMON!LOL |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME LIKE WRITE MORE! WHEN IS THE LEMON GOING TO BE DAMN IT!
BULMA IT LOOKS LIKE SHES IN Trouble OH BOY SEX SEX ANS MORE SEX LOL I LOVE THAT EVIL IDEA!
LATER! |
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