| "Ripples" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Title: Ripples
Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher On: September 29, 2003 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When you said he was a grown dog I thought that you meant he went into full dog state. I wondered how he could fit into the house (especially considering the fact that in 500 years he's probably even bigger!), and then got more confused when he kissed her! Ah, well. Niggling details. Still love it!
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Reviewed By: Miara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 00:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
ROTFL. Tail is hilarious. Must suck to be lord of all you survey, except for one rebellious (fluffy) appendage. I like the way you're switching back and forth between times. Both Sesshoumarus are interesting, and I can't wait to see what happens next. More Tail!
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Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher On: September 25, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter! Well written, too. Trust me, you deserve the rating. I check every day on this fic! Very nice!
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Reviewed By: Michi-Chan6 On: September 25, 2003 08:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Those last two chapters were great! I was laughing so hard. Anyways please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Topaz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF On: September 24, 2003 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sess is just soooooooo cute ;-)
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Reviewed By: Lady Phoenix On: September 23, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow im really enjoying this story. i love sess/kag fics. keep up the good work cant wait to see more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: September 23, 2003 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
How cute! Keep writing this is good! I wonder what Sesshoumaru(Past) will do when Kagome get back? Keep writing! Chimera is really good too!
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Title: Ripples
Reviewed By: Raquel On: September 23, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic!!!! I hope you post next chapter soon!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Ariane Adora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
9 on style because rarely your style isn't consistent, and 9 on spelling because you misspelled a word in... oh I don't remember what chapter, but you did. But that doesn't matter! Your fic is still terrific! I really like how you changed things up a bit but still kept everyone in character, with the exception of Kagome/Lynx, but that wouldn't be possible. Sesshoumaru is so sweet, and his tail!!!! That was so hilarious. So great, my goodness. I bow to your greatness and laugh in fear of the almighty Arella!
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF On: September 20, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A tail with a mine of its own (HAHAHAHAHA). Ok, (I've calmed down now)so Sess is feeling different about a lot of things in both eras, right??? |
Title: oh yeah
Reviewed By: egyptiny On: September 20, 2003 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon an eamail at clttlc2003.com when you do i love story i think Kagome shoulds say with the past sess. not the on in her time i like the old sess. better |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 05:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man!YAY!
I absolutly LOVED the last two chapters!!!
Please kepp on writing cause this story is sooooooo good!
Please update soon!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene * |
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: September 20, 2003 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My Gods! What we fan girls wouldn't give to be in the same possition as the lucky miko! I really love you ideas, it's very interesting and original!
Gotta love that tail most though, kawaii!!
Keep writing your stories are one of my fav! |
Reviewed By: Dark Topaz On: September 20, 2003 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad u updated can't wait for more |
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