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Title: ch5
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW...*is speechless* I say, you are a real Kurama-like one...Don't ask... But GREAT JOB!!!! And don't worry about these "Ghost Readers", there just too stuck up or are off in there own little world to care. Whatever you do, don't end this story. It's one of my favorites, and people don't happen to just wander onto my list. ^.~
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Title: ch4
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...And to think, I almost ate a tuna salad for lunch today.....Anyway, good story, keep up the good work and never get discouraged....but still, poor Yusuke, I know how the whole crashing into someone then getting sick thing goes....Never want to experience it again either.... Great job. ;)
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Title: ch.3
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LMAS*...can't...breath.*gasp*...Too much laughing!!!!!.....*falls out of chair*.....Great-Story-so *gasp* far!!!!!......*starts to calm down*....Well, you can tell that they had a good time......Yusuke's not THAT much of a weird eater...I've actually eaten some of the foods he said...Like the corn ceral and orange juice, in fact, I had that for breakfast this morning.^-^ Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 20:05 CDT
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This chapter has been the best by far for sure. I can not wait for the next and hope it is even better! Please hurry!
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have me. Hook, line, and sinker. I love the way this is playing out...I actually hear Yusuke telling the story. Somewhat like were good ol' child hood friends, talking about our lives and what's been happening in them since we've last seen each other. It's like he's right here * puts an arm around an invisable Yusuke's shoulder*...scary ,eh?
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Reviewed By: Jojo107@aol.com On: September 16, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* Great beginning. It's got me intrigued. And when my curiousity peaks, I do drastic measures to settle my curiousity down. Therefore, I'll keep on reading your story. ^_^ Keep up the good work.
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Title: Ch. 7
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 19:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh* What a great chapter! ^_^ I really enjoyed reading it. I really have no time to read chapters anymore but I make time for yours! Trust me, that's saying something! My only comment would be that I wish you had developed the party scene more. Although I like what you wrote, I really didn't feel the passage of time. I think you need more detail perhaps? That's my biggest thing with your story, especially when it comes to some of the scenes I particularly enjoy, like the 'kissing scene' *gets all giddy and giggles* he he he.... loved it. I definitely feel bad for both Hiei and Yuusuke. One is gonna have to lose and they're both hurting. It's a beautiful torture... *sighs again* And my deepest apologies for the many 'Ghost Readers' you have. Those who read and are too damn rude to give you a few moments of their time back. But know this, I AM reading and I APPRECIATE your work. Please keep updating.
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Title: Ch. 6
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well well well missy! You finally updated! *wags her finger at you* Do you know how long I have been waiting?? SHEESH! It's about time! Anyways... It was funny. A little side tracked from the story but interesting none the less. So I LIKEY! Keep going!
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Title: KuramaLover#?
Reviewed By: foxfire9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This is soooooo good!!! Cute and original; I love it!!! Please, please, please, pleeeeeease write quickly -- and update ASAP!!! I have to know what happens!!!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow.... You updated! *is happy* I had just about given up on you! I think your other readers did and you should email them and tell them you've updated! And man! Does Yuusuke have a potty mouth or what?? LOL
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 16:47 CDT
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*cries because there are no more chapters to read* *Then cries for poor Yuusuke and his missing Keiko* It's all so sad! *wails loudly* I hope you update regularly. This is exceptional. And I hope it never ends!! ^_^
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep! I'm back AGAIN! I think I'll review for every chapter. Your writing style is amazing and it sounds so much like Yuusuke, that I actually hear his voice! And he asking for a kiss! I was just cracking up, imagining Kurama's face! ^_^
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great fic! I'm totally entralled! It's so much fun and the characters.... I think you're doing a wonderful job keeping them "In Character"!
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Title: Ch. 1 Review
Reviewed By: Blkwidow77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! I love your beginning! It wonderful! And so VERY interesting! Yes, Kurama seems a little out of character but not a whole lot and I LOVE how your playing this out!
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Reviewed By: -KitsuneLover On: April 26, 2004 22:23 CDT
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too lazy to sign in. I loved the new chapter! That was great. I cant wait to read more.
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