"The Silver Rebel" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: October 09, 2003 21:11 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Woho! Inuyasha knows that she's the Silver Rebel. Really like the story! But wait was his girlfriend Kikyo? Evil! Love it!
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Reviewed By: inuyashasdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 20:09 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: really cute fic update soon
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Reviewed By: Bell On: October 09, 2003 19:57 CDT Comment/Review: YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!!!!!IS IS WICKED!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Title: Good! Reviewed By: Kitera_Matar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 19:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey! It's Clara from school! This is good! I think you could describe the story a bit more in a few places, people's views, emotions, the background, what others are wearing and how perhaps they got their nicknames and the people around her. Your grammar's good so far as i can see. I think you should bring sit into the story, like their are racing ans he falls and she quick stops and says, "Sit boy" or something and finishes the race, maybe she throws a chain to him (the rosary). But i like it so far. at risk of sounding a complete idiot, who's kouga? ~Kit ;)
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 22:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it's really interesting,plez write more!!!!!
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Title: Gah! Reviewed By: Lindy*girl On: September 30, 2003 17:44 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yea! I'd say that qualified as a cliffy! Dang it! Please up-date soon! =^.^=byebye!
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: September 30, 2003 15:54 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Giggles madly* Great cliffhanger! Must breathe! Now you better update! Updates are good therefore you must do them, especially when you leave cliffhangers! I really love this story!
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Reviewed By: TA*KUN On: September 28, 2003 10:44 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic is the best!!! I will hate you forever if you don't finish the fic!
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Reviewed By: Kria Devils [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 04:19 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HI!!!I LOVE IT PLEASE WRITE MORE!! BYE(^_^)
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Title: hi Reviewed By: lindy*girl On: September 25, 2003 03:20 CDT Comment/Review: I like the plot! kikyo sucks! And Kag kicks ass! Very cool combo^_^ see ya!
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Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 22:13 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ^^ update soon please ^^
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: September 24, 2003 18:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Blinks* Hehe, Kikyo is a bitch and Naraku just the shit kicked out of him. I'd have to say this is getting pretty good. And she dissed Kouga. Definatly a fic worth finishing!
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 18:06 CDT Comment/Review: This ficcy has lots of potential. Please don't stop like you do on ff.net. PWEASE!!??!! Udate soon.
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: September 22, 2003 16:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I didn't rate spelling or grammer for 1 reason, I suck at both so I couldn't help. So, what's Inuyasha's secret? I already know it but just wondering. I like. Hope you continue!
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Title: cool Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 06:49 CDT Comment/Review: please.....i like this.....oh please update soon!
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