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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Valerie*inu lover On: October 23, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg....what a great story and an awesome way to end it by the way! I have to tell you that you almost had a purfect story except for VERY few spelling grammars. I liked a lot it was very entertaining and I enjoyed it!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Valerie*inu lover On: October 23, 2004 21:39 CDT
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Reviewed By: Kao12 On: May 13, 2004 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good, but too many questions were left unanswered. Inuyasha said he might know of a way to save Shippo, but it is never elaborated. I'm assuming Inuyasha took the Shikon no Tama out of Kagome's side. But it is never mentioned how Inuyasha planned to use the object, or what it was exactly that he had in his hand. Was he going to use it to save Shippo? All that is said on the matter is, "In his hand, he felt something cool, round and smooth press in to his palm." The next scene is Kagura running in and yelling at Inuyasha. I rated it an 8 b/c I don't feel like the fic is finished. I know the final chapter has been posted, but it doesn't feel finished to me. When I got to the ending, the only impression I got was that you got tired of writing the story so you stopped. The ending itself was okay. Leaving it in the air for the reader to decide the reaction of Kagome's mom was pretty good. But, the subplots to the story were still left incomplete. It's frustrating to get to the end of story and feel like its incomplete. That's why I give it an 8. If the subplots were brought to a close, then the story would be worth a 10. I hope this is taken as a constructive critque b/c that's what I trying to give. You have good potential as a writer. I hope you continue writing and take what I'm suggesting into consideration. Take care and keep writing.
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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it was a great story and all but i got confused towards the ending is he a full demon or a half demon? other than that i did enjoy the story alot.
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 03:30 CST
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hahahaha funny!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 03, 2004 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, i hope you do a sequel!
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Title: Waahh??
Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 23:03 CST
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i love your story, but what's with that ending?? You def. need to add another chapter to wrap everything up. There are way too many unfinished story lines. Please please please pleeeease finish off this story (grovels and begs)
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Title: in the future
Reviewed By: 0;3~~~~~ On: January 02, 2004 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
moooorrrrreeee noooowwww bitch huuurrrrrrrrryyy ppllzz sorry that i called u a bitch hehehehe....hehe
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Reviewed By: lil'sesshi On: October 15, 2003 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was so funny please update soon.. I loved it !!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: gigi-chan On: October 08, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i LMAO... this chapter was good! i love how you made kouga interrupt (as usual), the phone situation, and having the presence of kag's mom at inu's place. oh how i wish you could've ended it differently, but it's perfect the way it is. as for your age... let's say 15??? let me know if i got it right at jasminguam@msn.com. laters!
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: October 08, 2003 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the story !! your age???? umh! 17? my email address is yasminmiranda@comcats.net . let me knwo if i got it right!
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: dragonblue On: October 07, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was an excellant chapter. I about lost it when they got interrupted by the phone call by Kouga, and the fact he actually told Kagome's mother what he did was just so.... funny. I just can't believe you ended like you did. What happened with the jewel Inu removed from Kagome. Plus I really want to know whats going to happen not that Mrs.Higurashi has shown up at the apartment. SO PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DO UPDATE A.S.A.P.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Runishie
Reviewed By: JanBug957@aol.com On: October 05, 2003 14:53 CDT
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That is an extremely good story keep it up keep it up oh yeah. It's funny too good idea Fluffy hehehe a history Hahahahahahaha Great they need to go fuck in Inuyasha's room I can't believe that bitch that was so nice! LOL Love it keep it up
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Reviewed By: poof On: September 30, 2003 20:01 CDT
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ILOVE IT! it is a great stroy you have to finish it soon befor I go nuts. I'm dying to know what happends. PLEASE update!!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds On: September 27, 2003 14:55 CDT
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She's not really going to die is she?!?! ahhh... please don't let her die. this is such a good story. Please update ASAP
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