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| "Yu-Gi-Oh!:Duelist of the Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Klingit On: November 14, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, this is somewhat harsh, but I do happen to be a flamer. Anyway, it went fom a pretty good story to a pretty crummy one. To begin with, introducing your own monsters doesn't really work unless they happen to be effective. Your original monsters were abominations. Your storyline is an old, classically used new tournament piece of junk one, and that disqualifies its originality. The only thing I could say good for the story is that is has good grammar and happens to have one semi-original twist, however, you destroyed any value that the Marik angle may have had by adding in the trio, and the following crap. Finally, the overall rating is because your story is an insult to the anime/manga Yu-Gi-Oh! series and because I could not believe that you took so long, and wasted a whole bunch of talent like that.
| Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: October 06, 2003 08:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Joey can't use the God card,last time some one that don't have Eygption blood or reincarnation of a Pharah/Tomb Robber or a high priest(Yugi,Ryou and Seto)got hit by lighting.
| Title: i really enjoy!
Reviewed By: Explosivo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay i gave you a 9 in originality because there is like one other dueling story. Also a 9 in style just because..uh...i dont know. Anwyay, I really enjoyed this story! Keep up the good work!
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