| "Transfer Student Inuyasha!" Reviews/Comments [ 226 ] |
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
of course a great up-date and can't wait for you to do it again^_^
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:28 CDT
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i Loved that chappy!!!!!!!! i cant wait until u UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! p.s. you ARE a GREAT writer so keep it up!!!!!!!!!! : )
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen (NLI) On: May 24, 2004 00:28 CDT
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I messed up on that! I mean I hope you DO NOT turn this into a lemon. sry for the mix up!
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen (NLI) On: May 24, 2004 00:26 CDT
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I loved the update and i hope you turn this into a lemon!!!! I will take a bit of lime MAYBE but i can't stand to read lemons!
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Reviewed By: In On: May 24, 2004 00:26 CDT
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I loved the update and i hope you turn this into a lemon!!!! I will take a bit of lime MAYBE but i can't stand to read lemons!
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Reviewed By: Emmalyn On: May 23, 2004 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sweet! ^_^ I love the part with Inuyasha and math...um, not that I have any trouble with it or anything! Heh, heh! -_- Anyway, I am enjoying reading your story, and I can't wait to read the end. Regarding the addition of a certain part of your story--do what comes naturally. If it adds to your story, go for it! Whatever you decide, I'll read it until the end. Best wishes, Emma-chan (a.k.a. Katsuyuki)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 23, 2004 17:12 CDT
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Excellent chapter! I have to say I am both happy and sad regarding the lemon. Happy because the story has been so passionate and romantic that a lemon would most likely detract from that. However sad because we will never see a physical representation of their feelings. As a suggestion you could write a lmeon but post it as a seperate story. That way those who wish to read it can do so and those who don't can continue without. Either way I look forwards to seeing what comes next. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: cufflink95@aol.com
Reviewed By: cuffers On: May 23, 2004 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your ideas are kinda cute and show imagination, as far as a lemon fanfic goes, a light one would be appropriate based on the plot you've culminated to date, they are close to it as you ended the last chapter, there is definately sexual tension going on............go for it
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Reviewed By: x_xInuyasha_Foreverx_x On: May 11, 2004 21:26 CDT
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OMG I Love your fanfic so much! i cant wait for the next chapters! The only suggestion i have is that you should try and make the chaps a little longer. Anywho, You are a great writer and i look forward to your writing. ~x_xInuyasha_Foreverx_x~
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!!! Plz update SOON!!!!!!!!!! p.s. add a little lemon if ya want....the story is still GREAT with or without it
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Reviewed By: hockeygal On: May 11, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update SOON i think u have done a g8 job on this story i couldn't stop reading it and now that i am done i want u to update it SOON :-) pwease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (i think that it is g8 that u put cliffhangers in it )
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 22:23 CDT
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PLEASE DON'T ADD A LEMON!!! I can't stand to read them and if you added one i would be forced to stop reading it!!! *sniff*
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Reviewed By: Inugurl220 On: May 10, 2004 17:34 CDT
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i love your story it is great you would make a great author! well you are kinda one
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really really really really really really really really great up-date and funny as usally and I can't wait till you up-date again^_^
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Reviewed By: hockeygal On: May 09, 2004 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is sooooooooooooooooo awesome !!!! :-) i can't wait to read more i love the story
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