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Reviewed By: darkempereror [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has great potential. Because you haven't put the lemons in yet, would you mind titling the chapters with the lemons, and making sure nothing important happens in those chapters so nobody whose underage, like myself, has to miss out on the actual story? Anyway, great story, make sure you update often, and... thats it!
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Reviewed By: Inu90210 On: June 18, 2004 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 00:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's been a very long time since you updated wat almost a year like in 3 months or so...well it's a good fic so far the plot is good..keep it up!! Sayounara!!
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Reviewed By: cliffyhateR554 On: June 16, 2004 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
JESUS GOD DAMNED FUCKING CHRIST!!!! YOU LAZY FAT ASSED BASTARD!!! DO YOU KNOW HOW GOOD THIS FIC COULD HAVE BEEN IF YOU HAD KEPT GOING WITH IT??? MY GOD, IT'S BEEN ALMOST A YEAR SINCE YOU'VE UPDATED, AND I CAN TELL THAT A BUNCH OF PPL HAVE GIVEN UP ON YOU, BUT U KNOW WHAT... IF YOU DONT FINISH THIS FIC, I WILL TORTURE YOU FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE!!! I'LL WRITE A REVIEW EVERY FRIGGIN TIME I GET ON THIS SITE, SO YOU BETTER WATCH YOU BACK AND HURRY THE HELL UP AND UPDATE BEFORE I KILL YOU MYSELF!!! AHEM... AHEM... sorry about that, but i will. this is a very good fic, and i would love to c it carried out, even though its been 3 months less then a year since you've updated. i'm sure that you could pick it up where you left off. cha 4 now!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it has a good plot and I can't wait til you update. But it didn't have much detailing and I have to ask why you extented the word 'damn' and it was spelled wrong. But all things concidered it's good.
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so I like it. You really skipped around when Inuyasha was going to send Kikyou peacefully but I'll forgive you 'cause I really don't care how it happened as long as she's gone. Your chapters are REALLY SHORT so please when writing make 'em a bit longer. Capitalize your I's. You also can do me a favor by UPDATING!!!! I'm waiting.
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Reviewed By: UNKNOWN INU On: October 01, 2003 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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Title: good...but
Reviewed By: TakahiroMonkey On: October 01, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far it's a nice fanfic However you seem to skip around a bit. for example, in getting kikyo to go peacefully, no details are given. Chapters seem a bit short as well. There is a distinct lack of drama and lack of human connection in different aspects. But since hentai is a theme, it is probably a merciful way of giving people a fast-forward to what they probably clicked in to see so basically, it feels a bit abridged...like a summary. Which is not neccessaril a good or bad thing, just an average thing that feels a little empty
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Title: great
Reviewed By: inukoro On: September 30, 2003 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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Reviewed By: kagome_chan_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really good, Please update soon
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Title: SAD!
Reviewed By: INUGIRL004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW, that was well writen but, kinda sad! Poor Inuyasha, and Shippou. Update soon ;)
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Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 15:28 CDT
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TO CCCOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it! PLEZ, PLEZ up-date SOON! SO SAD!!!!!! OMG! OK, I'm done up-date SOON!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Lover On: September 28, 2003 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far. I hope theres another chaptor soon. ^_~
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Title: From a fellow writer
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update I want to findout what happens soon. I love it so far. It seems so indepth. I love the plot you have created now I want to see you carry out the rising and falling action and not to mention the climax ^_~ the intro was great.
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