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Title: Never end
Reviewed By: Chibi-Kerochan On: November 08, 2003 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is very amusing. Sessumaru is very caring. which is very out of character for him as i would think. Yet in ways you keep Sessumaru in character. Very well done. But he does care for rin in the series alot so i guess in way you put sessumaru in character but sessumaru didn't really like kagome very much since she is human. ::+::+::+::+::+::Now for Inuyahsa.::+::+::+::+:: (( No flame just stating my opinion here k? just wanted to let you know heads up)) Inuyasha is my fave character! in fact he does care about kagome even though he doesn't like to show it. You have Inuyasha way out of character. I know inuyasha can be a jerk in the series but you make him sound like he doesnt care about any one which isn't ture because he secretly loves Kagome and cares about sango, miroku ((meh sorta)) LOL! and little shippo. Even though he doesn't want to admit it. but other then that i love the story. I wonder what will happen next. You are a very good writer. I can easily read you're story and the paragraphs are easy to read and understand. i like you're writing style and Kouga is so in character! LOL! Keep up the good work! I love the story. Please let me know when you update! Kerochankawaii@msn.com e-mail me asap! ((As soon as possible! once u update that is)) LOL! Sincerely, Chibi-Kerochan
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe you should make the chapters a little longer because those cliffies are a killer!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kilea On: October 17, 2003 12:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
-snicker- i dont really like Kouga so i will enjoy whatever pain Sesshoumaru inflicts on him. >=)
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Reviewed By: Starry Dragon Knights [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 22:11 CDT
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GREAT STORY! I think everyone who has read it liked it just as much as I have, but if they haven't then they don't know what a good story is!
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going so far so good, can't wait till the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lady Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 09:07 CDT
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Cool beans~! Good Sesshy story. please add more chappies!
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Reviewed By: Kilea859 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 06:01 CDT
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that is not a chaper...that is called a PARAGRAPH!!! NOT FAIR!! I WANNA REAL CHAPPIE!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: ioke On: October 04, 2003 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey... great story!! i cant wait to read your next chapter!! update really soon!! could you send me an email at chipahoy702@yahoo.com when you post up your next chapter??
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Reviewed By: Kria Devils [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok i messed up on that review!!SORRY!!but i want you to make more chapters kay!!BYE(^_^)
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Reviewed By: Kria Devils [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!YOU UPDATED!!IM SO HAPPY!!AND SENCE YOU MADE MORE CHAPTERS,WHY DONT YOU MAKE SOME MORE!!PLEASE!! BYE(^_^)
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Reviewed By: Kria Devils [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 22:07 CDT
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Ok!!Your being mean!!I DON'T LIKE MEAN PEOPLE!!So please wright more(puppy dog eyes)PLEASE!!!Oh ya just cause i want to im going to tell you to read my Fan Fiction(no this is not a command,so if you*sniff*don't want*sniff*to read it*sniff* you don't*sniff*have to*sniff*,BUT IF YOU DO ILL BE SO HAPPY!!)so please read my fan fiction its call Red Rain!!PLEASE UPDATE!!!PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: September 24, 2003 13:17 CDT
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i love this story! Please update!
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Reviewed By: Arella [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 22:52 CDT
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I'm really hooked on this story, so YOU CANNOT STOP!!!!! I can't wait for Kagome to get with Sess. He'll know how to treat her right and I hope that Inuyasha feels really really guilty for being so heartless. Huh, knowing him, though, he probably won't even know what he did wrong. Marvelous story! Fabulous! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: September 22, 2003 18:57 CDT
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Awesome beginning please add more. Rin is so cute she just has sessies wrapped around her finger. isn't it adorable. inu-yasha once again leaves kagome to die. go fig. love your fic. please ask more
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 13:24 CDT
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Some OOC but it is interesting so far and you write well. Keep going. cat
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