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Reviewed By: Mely On: September 23, 2003 14:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
The story seems pretty intersting so far, I like it. Please continue with story.
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Reviewed By: Amanda123 On: September 22, 2003 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get start next. hope you get the next chappy at soon.
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Reviewed By: June16458 On: September 22, 2003 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Next chapter soon please amandajune45@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Little Rin On: September 22, 2003 21:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Um Definately OOC, but interesting. *grins* Can you find a really fun way to kill Zarbon? Zarbon... He's like the gay guy who you never wanted to go straight that just decided to do so. *shudder*
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Reviewed By: LZ On: September 22, 2003 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job so far! I like how you have Zarbon and even Dodoria under Vegeta's command.
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