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Reviewed By: spini On: February 13, 2004 09:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yeah can´t wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: mona On: February 12, 2004 04:17 EST
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please please please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 09, 2004 07:47 EST
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cant wait 4 da next update, and till b and v get 2getha!!!! ^_^ surfs up!
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 09, 2004 07:43 EST
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plz plz plz update this soon!!!!! it rocks major!!!!!! SURFS UP EVERYONE!!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: February 09, 2004 06:28 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!! please update ASAP... wow... this chapter put at the edge of my sit. please...please tell your started writing the next chapter
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 21:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, you should write more, you should, you should. It's good. Write more.
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 12, 2003 17:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ahhhhhhhh!!!!! (happy Scream) go vegeta, go vegeta. VEGETA IS A GOD!!!!! AND I MEAN THIS!!!!! update ASAP please please.... pretty please ahhhhhhhhh!!!! (happy scream again)
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 02, 2003 06:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good story line... can't for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: mona On: September 24, 2003 19:04 EDT
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update please!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KrissyE19 On: September 23, 2003 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good cant't wait for chapter 2 and so on.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: September 23, 2003 14:38 EDT
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The story seems pretty intersting so far, I like it. Please continue with story.
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Reviewed By: Amanda123 On: September 22, 2003 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get start next. hope you get the next chappy at soon.
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Reviewed By: June16458 On: September 22, 2003 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Next chapter soon please amandajune45@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Little Rin On: September 22, 2003 21:55 EDT
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Interesting. Um Definately OOC, but interesting. *grins* Can you find a really fun way to kill Zarbon? Zarbon... He's like the gay guy who you never wanted to go straight that just decided to do so. *shudder*
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Reviewed By: LZ On: September 22, 2003 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job so far! I like how you have Zarbon and even Dodoria under Vegeta's command.
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