| "Half Full or Half Empty?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 19:28 CST
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel_2891 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 01:03 CST
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hey hey hey!i was laughin at that chapter!not that it was bad, im just not used to reading lesbian things.anyway i was wonderin can ya put some bakura/ryou yaoi????i would love it if ya did!keep up the good work!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: oichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I LOVE your story! I just wanted you to know that (PLEASE don't be offended by the raiting!!! I don't want to be hated!) You might want to check the grammer and spelling a little bit, but if you see my stories, I'm not one to talk. ^^ In fact, I'm worse. ^^ I'm not really into the yuri thing, but it really doesn't bother me that much. I have a friend who is bi, so I'm kinda used to it. ^^ But I would like to see Bakura/Ryou! *is a die-hard fan* I don't want to be one of those people who tell you what to do with your stories ( I really don't like it when people do that to me ), but I just wanted to remind you that I LOVE your story! Keep it up!!! .......sorry for the REALLY long review *blushes*
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Title: funny!
Reviewed By: Will (Black Fury) On: November 18, 2003 09:51 CST
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Oh, hell, that was funny (=answer: She's blonde) That was freakin' hilarious, i swear. But Bakura needs to do something (I'm surprised the blender wasn't his idea, but he'd be laughing his head off). Oh, better yet: do something with Malik and sharp, pointy objects that cause pain. (And a certain specific golden scepter-looking thing...) Sadistic bastard, aren't i? fic's turning out great. interesting, but great anyway.
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Title: note to Washu
Reviewed By: authoress aka JoeysGal On: November 16, 2003 16:10 CST
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no offence taken Washu! I promise there will be no more lezbo shit in this fic anymore so you don't have to worry about that. I was just trying to fit yaoi/yuri and heterosexual couplings ALL in this fic to please everyone if you know what I mean... but there may be some Ryou/Bakura yaoi soon... I'm not sure. Anyway, glad you're honest! btw, you got any ideas about my random fic? I kinda got writer's block ;_;
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Title: eh.. too lazy to log on
Reviewed By: Washu-Washu On: November 15, 2003 23:30 CST
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well.. that was an.. interesting chapter.. no offence girl.. you know how i love your stories.. but it wasn't really my type of chapter.. it was well written and i love it.. it was just.. i 'm really like the whole.. lezbo bi thing.. but it was good! and yes.. the blender and getting walked on thing did do the job.. *evil grin* ^_^ i love the story.. really i do.. if this sounds like a flame.. BURN MAI WITH IT!!! mwhahahah!!! anyways.. update soon girl ^_^ (and my taste in things doesn't matter so you can just ignore that..just passing the feelings along) ~*~Your Fan Foreva~*~ Washu
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Title: Klingit
Reviewed By: Sakabatou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 20:20 CST
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Hey, hey, sorry, I didn't mean to upset you. It's ok, you're absolutely right, you should right it the way you want to. And I am not going to stop you. I was just telling you that I think it would be better if it is that way. But go on ahead. Half-Full or Half-Empty? is still on my fave stories list. Ok? I didn't/don't even know what flaming is/was. And don't let it stop you. Once again, sorry for any trouble. ~Kela
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Title: a note to Klingit
Reviewed By: authoress aka JoeysGal On: November 10, 2003 19:44 CST
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I'd just like to say that you have every right to portray your feelings in here toward my fic but I don't appreciate the way that YOU would want things to turn out in it. This is my fic and it can be however I want it to be. You obviously haven't read many fics involving yaoi or yuri because my fic is no different. Your flame wasn't encouraging but it's nothing to stop me continuing with this. So go and tell the world what you think about other fics and see just how popular you are after that.
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Reviewed By: Klingit On: November 10, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that these rating will probably make me unpopular around here. But I call it like I see it. First off, your story begins real good. I really liked the story for the first couple of chapters. There are a few things which completely ruin this story, though. First off, the hentai addiction. Your characters seem to live for sensuality. They have sex just out of the blue. I also don't like how you pass off your use of yaoi/yuri like it is an everyday thing. The last time I checked, the gay population was a minority. I cannot stand that, but now, you're making Shika bi, and that angers me. You seem to like making your characters seem weak, or fragile. I don't happen to like that very much either. And your pairings, and your other O/C's, well, that is just the beginning. I would go on, but I think I've made my point. You have a lot of talent, and the way I see it, it is all going down the drain. One thing I do like, however, is your accurate portrayal of feelings, and your language skills are not all that bad. Please don't wrong the original series by involving any homosexual encounters (any more.)~Kela
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel_2891 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 17:34 CST
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fun lemon chappie!anyway in a future chapter will ryou and bakura do anything gayish?i hope so...keep up the great work and continue updating!!
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Title: heheh
Reviewed By: Phoaraohess aka Washu On: November 10, 2003 03:11 CST
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go you! go you! go go! go you!! another great chappy.. though i usually don't support lezbos because i think it's ew... you did an awesome job protraying it just right that it was still a little eww.. but it was from a straight's POV.. very cool.. ^_^ can't wait to read the next chapter!! ~*~Washu~*~
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel_2891 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 16:34 CST
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bamboozled........funny word.heehee!^_^aaaaanyway i hope you get my e-mail.*mumbles*stupid outlook express...keep up the good work and keep on updating!!!!!whoa i used keep twice in 1 sentence!wow.......^_^
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel_2891 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 17:45 CST
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I LOVE YOUR FANFIC STORY MAJIGGY!!!!!!!update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: authoress aka joeysgal On: November 04, 2003 19:53 CST
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Awwww special thanks to BlackFury and Lady_Washu!! You guys are great! You're like my only two number one fans for this fic lol but your encouragement is more than enough to keep me writing more! Thanks you guys!!
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Title: Great.
Reviewed By: Will, aka BLACKFURY On: November 04, 2003 18:35 CST
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Better and better! Thank you for granting my request. further idea: Malik banishes Tea, her lez girlfriend tries to beat the shlamazels out of him, then Bakura intercedes and banishes her, too! You just made my entire week, thank you!
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