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Title: Still good
Reviewed By: RavenCrow16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the originality and especially the evil little bunny. But hey don't let the lack of reviews get you down. I hope you update soon....I like it anyways.
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Reviewed By: InuGirl13 (La! such a bad girl I am not signing in!) On: February 09, 2004 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie Evil Bunny! I love Snuffle-Upagus! *is stared at* what!? he's a wooly mammoth? Ok I'll shut up now >.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 07:26 CST
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Snuffle-upagus! *reads to Miroku* "Goldie-Snuffle and the Seven Bears" One day a beautiful, golden-haird Snuffle-upagus named Goldie-Snuffle was walking through the woods with her friend Big Bird. "Goldie," said Big Bird, "you have never met any of my friends, and they all say there is no such thing as a Snuffle-upagus. Will you come meet my friends, the 7 Bears? They live right around the corner." "Oh, goody!" said Goldie-Snuffle. From the Sesame Street Library, Volume 7. She ends up breaking all the chairs, all the beds, and eats all the spaghetti...then leaves Big Bird to take the blame. Big Bird tries to tell the bears that a Snuffle-upagus did it, but alas, they do not believe her...since they don't believe Snuffle's exist. *whispers* I have a five year old son (^_^) We have 20 billion Sesame Street books. Anyway, I love the last line... "Oh sweetie! `Cause if he wasn't, he would have killed you." I also enjoyed reading about Sango and Inuyasha, and seeing Sango admit to herself that she doesn't love Miroku...she just didn't want to be alone and didn't like the abrupt change.
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Reviewed By: Darkcatz On: February 02, 2004 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a damn good fic and as i said before the Budda ramblings do turn me on, that's how my boyfriend is except it is in italian. It sounds so much better
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 09:51 CST
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I noticed the lack of humour, but I think it is appropriate for the chapter. Humour might have ruined it. I'm glad that Kagome stood up for her feelings for Miroku, and clearly pointed out that Miroku is the better man ^^
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Reviewed By: KawaiiMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I demand more! ^_^ That is the shit right there. You are now my favorite author. You rock my socks.
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Reviewed By: Ongaku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 04:55 CST
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I'm going to use a word that a couple of people I know online use all the time... SSSQQUUEEE!! That's right! SQUEE! lol Love the chappy. Oh yes... but just about anything Miroku does can turn you on... lol Inuyasha is pissed off, yup yup. great job!
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Reviewed By: macbaby On: January 11, 2004 12:21 CST
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great fic! Please update soon. I simply must know what Inu Yasha is going to do. Poor Miroku....
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru. On: January 11, 2004 07:32 CST
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Poor Miroku. Couldn't Inuyasha see how willing Kagome was? Okay, so maybe that was the actual problem. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: January 11, 2004 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be the funniest Inuyasha fic that I ever read. I just love Kagome's lines. I can't wait till the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: December 12, 2003 08:59 CST
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Oh,good! I'm not the only one who is insanely turned on by deep, meaningful Buddhist doctrine. That, and I think the combination of loose, long dark hair and prayer beads is sexy. I miss the evil bunny, though!
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Reviewed By: Ongaku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 11:57 CST
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They ate the bunny! hehehe Stupid bunny, bet it was tasty... actually I've never had bunny before. hehe I wouldn't have a clue. Haha I liked it when Miroku was telling Kagome to not poke the demon hehehe. I can just see it, a slighlty drunk Kagome poking a knocked out Inuyasha hehe. Poor Sango she found out and now has to keep it to herself! That's never any fun hehe Yesh! 2 lovely chapters I get to read this time mwhaha *feels lucky today* Kagome wants to do it in front of them hahahahahah!!!! Yes.. the fire would be warmer though *falls over hehe* AAWWW HOW SWEET! *glomps you* "Yeah." She sighed. "I'm yours." *wink* Uh oh Sango turned Sadist! heheh Or just plain coocoo, can't say I don't blame her though lol! "You just sounded so Buddha-ish and stuff. It turns me on!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! OMG u stopped there! EVIL! I'll have you know that!... Eh! What am i talking about! Keep up the great work and chappies! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 09:02 CST
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Somehow, some way (perhaps the puppy barked it out...if I could understand dog talk...) I knew that Miroku was going to slip up and say more than he wanted. Good luck writing out his reaction and Kagome's reaction. At least Sango was spared, since she went to sleep peacefully dreaming of brutally injuring Miroku and Kagome *laughs*
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Reviewed By: Vernie-B On: December 09, 2003 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah!!! You have got to have Inuyasha catch them going at it eventually. Please?? That would be so funny!! =)
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 07:27 CST
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You should definately bring back the angry demon monster bunnies *laughs* Very cute... "Don't poke the demon." *laughs more* They drank the sake...did they eat the father of destruction? Will they gain ultimate power if they do? Will Inuyasha wake up with a terrible headache? I think I already know the answer to that one. Now that I've traveled into unnecessary thoughts, I'll just click Submit.
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