| "My Demon Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: LandraBlaze
Reviewed By: LandraBlaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short, but sweet. I like longer stories, but for a one shot I think it was darn good. ^_^
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it interesting. Usually, I don't go for oneshots or even those "Inuyasha goes crazy and claims Kagome." Fics. But it was kinda fun to read...Thank you for the brief entertainment.
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Reviewed By: danni987 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u should go on and make more chaps cuz u could make this a really good story like caliko said kagome hides inuyasha's sword (i cant spell it lol) so she can see her demon inuyasha u know and at the end he finds our kagome is with child and she tells him every thing lol
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Title: My Demon Lover
Reviewed By: Karen Lacey On: September 16, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel that this story could become a whole story. I really like the factor of the Inuyoukia "Inu has no problems claiming Kagome as mate, he will claim, protect and cherish unlike human Inu wants too but doesn't want to subject her to the hardships prujudiecs of a mixed marriage. It very interesting that full youki is much more confindent and ruthless. I find the full youki fics enthralling because they basically have two diffent attitudes toward mating. One fuck you your mine mentality or you are my chosen one, my one true mate pleace chose me back. It is in the claiming styles that cause one o become involeved with the story. Write more on this story please.
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Title: My Demon Lover
Reviewed By: Karen Lacey On: September 16, 2005 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel that this story could become a whole story. I really like the factor of the Inuyoukia "Inu has no problems claiming Kagome as mate, he will claim, protect and cherish unlike human Inu wants too but doesn't want to subject her to the hardships prujudiecs of a mixed marriage. It very interesting that full youki is much more confindent and ruthless. I find the full youki fics enthralling because they basically have two diffent attitudes toward mating. One fuck you your mine mentality or you are my chosen one, my one true mate pleace chose me back. It is in the claiming styles that cause one o become involeved with the story. Write more on this story please.
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Reviewed By: zab On: October 30, 2004 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
the grammer was so bad in places, it interferred with the story. people were more or less in character, but other then that...it was just a fuck fic.
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooh another great fic. I'm amazed I usually don't go for one shots. But hey lemony goodness is lemony goodness. After all I need to tend to my perverted side once in a while.
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Reviewed By: caliko (not signed in) On: February 06, 2004 13:02 CST
Comment/Review:
omg.. i have this weird plot bunnie running around after reading this... of Kagome HIDING Inuyasha's sword every now and then, just to get her demon... /snicker/ Gotta ignore it, tho.. no time to write lately... But, if you like, PLEASE DO.. ^_^ I would love to see what you can do with it
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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: January 02, 2004 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. you should continue it or sumthin.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 16, 2003 06:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's was extremely original.. at least that's what i think, Fucking good.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 14:39 CST
Comment/Review:
wow
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD MAKE MORE CHAPS CUZ THE FIRE IS JUST WARMIN
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Reviewed By: Queen Rin On: November 16, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That ugly demon was gonna EAT Kagome?? EW!! A wierdo AND a perv!!
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic i think you should continue, it sorta leaves wanting more
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: HAP [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! that's all i can say, i love your stories!!!!!!!
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