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Reviewed By: BabayBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 14:05 CST
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*rereads last chap* NOOOOO!!!! If i didn't hate kik before!!!! *growls* AND I DID!!!! You dont wanna know half the senarios i made to kill her. They involved salt flats and cement walls covered with go-away-evil symboles! SEE LOOK!!! This is what i told my friend while reading!!! Akiaoshba1: BITCH WHORE!!! Nathalia9182: ? Akiaoshba1: INU WAS GOING 2 KISS KAG FOR THE 1ST TIME N KIK SHOWED HER UGLY FACE!!!! I THOUT I HAD KILLED HER!! Akiaoshba1: *GROWLS* Nathalia9182: ... Nathalia9182: o Akiaoshba1: *ATTACKS* I THOUGHT THE LYE DID THE TRICK Nathalia9182: guess u need something better than that Akiaoshba1: GOD DAMNED BITCH!!!! *USES HAND AND RIPS OUT BLACK HEART* Akiaoshba1: *RUN TO SALT FLATS AND BURRYES IT* Nathalia9182: heh Akiaoshba1: DYE BITCH DYE Nathalia9182: u mean Nathalia9182: DIE Akiaoshba1: FOR ONE IN YOUR LIFE OR AFTER LIFE DIE THE RITE WAY!!!! Nathalia9182: not dye Akiaoshba1: *HACKS BODY INTO MICOSCOPIC PEICES/MOOSH* Akiaoshba1: *FEEDS TO MAD COWS AND KILLS COWS* Akiaoshba1: *BURNS THEIR FLESH8 Nathalia9182: wow Akiaoshba1: *GIVES IT TO INSANE MEN* Nathalia9182: lots trouble Akiaoshba1: TO EAT Akiaoshba1: *KILLS CRAZY MEN* Akiaoshba1: *BURNS BODYS AGIN* Akiaoshba1: *MIXES W/ GLUE* Akiaoshba1: *MAKES INTO CEMENT WALL* Nathalia9182: lol Akiaoshba1: *COVERS WALL WITH EVIL WARDS AND BLESSES IT* Akiaoshba1: that should work Nathalia9182: it better Nathalia9182: or u'll die Nathalia9182: from an attack Akiaoshba1: lol I cant wait to see what happens!!! How horrible is everyone going to feel when they fall in love. With people they can 'never' have!!! I want Inuyasha to tell Mir...that he loves 'the princess'! UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 11:12 CST
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Thanks for reviewing folks. I am happy to annouce I am almost done with chapter 10.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 19:52 CST
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I love your story! Update when you can, I hope you get over your sinus infection! :)
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 16:10 CST
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Hope you can update soon. I am really happy that you were actually able to show how kagome and inuyasha end up falling in love, instead of them just meeting and falling in love. hope that sango and miroku have a good spar. good luck with the rest.
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just luv this fic so far can't wait till your next up-date
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 12:57 CST
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I hate taking up review space doing this.
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: November 17, 2003 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the fluff in this new chapter. i really enjoy reading this. i will patiently await the next chapter. can't wait to see what happens next. :D
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 22:15 CST
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Thanks for reviewing!
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Reviewed By: StupidLoser317 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 18:18 CST
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I loved this chapter! Ooooo... that kiss was so close! >.< That was annoying how Kikyo interupted it. I like fluff! Continue please! I'm begging you to update as soon as you can. PLEASE! I really want to know what happens next. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 23:11 CST
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There will be a slight delay in my updates. I have to go to a footballgame against my sisters school and after Thanksgiving I have finals. So if you get an update good if not...I'm sorry.
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Title: Pretty Darn Good!
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I would like to say how very sorry I am for not updating my story lately but I have the biggest block right now. Next you are so very very talented, I love this story it feels as if I myself am weaved into this story. Its descripted perfectly. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Also the touch with Sess/Rin was great! I know some people probably hated that but I think it was wonderful and showed that you have actual individuality. X3 I'll be looking out for your next update! Riomi
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its me, i just had to check out ur flic since you were so nice as to read mine, i really like it to, cant wait for more
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 14:05 CST
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Yes, I still have to leave a comment to see your reviews.
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Reviewed By: ME On: November 10, 2003 21:20 CST
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Naw!! loved the chapter just the way it was!! can't wait for you to update some more^_^
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