Reviewed By: Stories4Boys [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 13:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: You tell a fantastic story! I can't wait to see part 2! Also, I noticed some spelling and grammar errors - intentional and unintentional. I'd be more than happy to beta for you if you'd like, as it sometimes distracted me from the story, but I like how you made Sheik and Link's relationship develop as a childhood puppy-love thing and carried it on to more mature (albeit confusing to poor Link) feelings later on. Fantastic! ~Stories4Boys
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