| "WALK LIKE A MAN" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: I'm so happy!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 17:55 CDT
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There hasn't been an update in a while and I was starting to get worried! I love the fact that Mai and Trucks are still cuddley even after not seeing each other in so long. Please update again soon and keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating! I've been waiting for weeks and I could hardly wait any longer which is why I sent you the message yesterday.~.~ Good chapter. But we need more. Update soon please! Definition of 'delight' Vegeta-style: 'Ripping your enemy apart, and laughing at his screams for mercy...' So says the god-like Vegeta. Vegeta's Mate ^,~'
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Reviewed By: Nouk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story!
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Title: Vegeta's Mate
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best fic's I've read in awhile. I wonder when and how Mai will tell Trunks she's his girlfriend/assistant and still keep the guy....that means that you'll have to do some serious posting and keeping your fans happy. Love it and I'll add you to my fav authors and this fic to my fav's too.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 16:46 CDT
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We already know how I feel about your other fic but I like this one as well. My last review was very short so I decided it needed a longer one. I like Mai. Smart, classy, fully able to rebuild a car *Woot*. It almost seems wrong that shes working as a temp. In post android reconstruction era though I guess jobs are few and far between. I love the subtle comments about Trunks\' physical strength. I also like your portrayl of the Android era. In regulating it to the sidelines, you highlight the resiliency of the human spirit. One of your strongest stregths as a writer is your ability to show instead of tell. " Mai" his voice sounded nervous. "I think there is something you should know" ---- Ya think???? "He always commented that taking over Capsule Corp. not his first choice in careers."---- Hm... I wonder what the first could have been. "I'd rather face Frezia or even my father on a bad day"---- Hmmmmm... Wonder how long its gonna take Mai to catch on to comments like that. -El-
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 13:01 CDT
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That was fun. You should do more. Normally I don\'t like OC\'s but you are pulling it off.
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Reviewed By: idy On: September 28, 2003 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like ur fanfic.i hope u continue it,can't wait for the first chapter.
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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