| "Teal Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: fadingslowly On: June 29, 2004 13:02 CDT
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i reviewed this already on ff.net, but it's just so good that i wanted to give you some more encouragement over here! keep up the good work! i love it!
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 29, 2004 09:27 CDT
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Thanks a whole lot! Loved the chapter. I wonder what was with that earthquake? And also is Videl going to find out who gold fighter's real identity in the next chapter? Well can't wait for the next chapter! I gotta find out! Update soon, k? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 19, 2004 16:51 CDT
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Hey are you there? I'm still waiting. I'm practically on the net everyday since I have nothing to do. Well most of the time any way. And Teal Eyes is great, please update soon. Oh and thanks again for getting rid of Crystelle. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 07, 2004 16:07 CDT
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Sorry so long. I couldn't get on the net because of the telephone line. Well I'm back and I'm really really looking forward to read the next chappie after weeks from the net. Hope you have the next chappie soon figured out. Well catcha later!! :)
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Reviewed By: dotta On: May 27, 2004 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! you've finally written chapter 16! I love your story and I'm always waiting for your next chapters.
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Title: Thanks a lot!!!!!
Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 13, 2004 21:18 CDT
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Oh Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!! I'll say ch 16 is one of my favorite chappies so far. Thanks soooooo much for writing that chappie! Oh your welcome and I reviewed (including this one) 4 times! thanks for getting rid of Crystelle! Out of the story! Out of the picture! Whew! And again PLEASE have the next chappie up as soon as you can! You're the best! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 10, 2004 18:28 CDT
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Hi. I know this sounds a lil' too casual so I'll just get to it. PPPPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEE! I really hope you're not so busy! I'm really desperate! I have to know what happens! *has puppy eyes* I'm trying to stay calm and wait, but sometimes that's not me I gotta know! *clears throat while sweatdropping* ^_^; Well that's enough. Just please update soon!
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Title: Anyone there?
Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 04, 2004 17:52 CDT
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Hey Mystic Writer! Are you there? Don't wanna lose you out there. It's been a long time since the last chapter was up. Don't think you've lost all the readers and reviewers. I'm still here and waiting. Come on everyone, why not start reviewin' again. It seems like Mystic Writer is in a daze here! Your a great author, keep up the great work. And hope you'll be able to update soon. Please? *gives the puppy face look*
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: April 19, 2004 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh Please don't let the story end soon. I'm a huge fan of DBZ! As so much for that Crystelle creep, SHE has totally met her dimise(death) when I get to meet her!!!!!! *pulls out her sword and chases Crystelle all over the place screaming, "MEET YOUR DEMISE YOU TRAITOR!!!!* I can't wait for the next chapter! Another thing Teal Eyes is AWSOME!Gotta go I've got to fulfill the promise I made to Videl! *"DIE"*
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Reviewed By: Elenek (forgot to log in) On: April 07, 2004 00:22 CDT
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I'm enjoying this alot. I love the fact that your very in character. Thank You for getting rid of Sayiaman. (I always felt that he was annoying and kept waiting for Vegeta to beat him silly and tell him to stop posing like a member of the Ginu(sp???) Force.) This is a relationship that gets so overlooked in the fan fics and I find Gh/Videl fics refreshing. Please continue. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: twin blades On: April 02, 2004 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Correct me if I;m wrong but are you also called Saiya? If you please update already those cliffhangers are annoying. By the way can't use white tiger since its taken.
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Reviewed By: Vegetas Bondage Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much ... I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 20:59 CST
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Chapter 11 was soooo good! I love your story. You're such a good writer. That Crystelle woman needs to go on with herself and that stupid engagement ring! Sheesh! ('x') *pulls out a dagger and runs after her* Die!
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Reviewed By: LionHeart823 On: October 17, 2003 05:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey PLEASE keep writing 'Teal Eyes' is awsome.
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Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: October 13, 2003 23:15 CDT
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Cool! Can't wait for more!
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