| "why Inu Yasha doesn't like his ears touched" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 23:58 CDT
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awww very sweet! I love the "cheesy ending"!! haha but one thing- If InuYasha gets aroused when someone rubs his ears... well... Didn't Kagome's mom rub his ears when she first met him? haha sorry, I'm just being wierd. Great fic! Very cute!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Pyro Star [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! it was so sweeeeeeet!!!! inuyasha must reeeeeeaaaaaaaally like his ears petted. you should do fics for the other inuyasha characters too!! ~Pyro
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Reviewed By: Taiji_Ya_Hunni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You could write like...softcore anime porn if you tried...keep up with the hentai! Lemon fictions are always the best...love the work! Kimikko Narusegawa
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad but what about the other companiuns
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Title: lo!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! one word (okay 5-no8) KAWAII!!!! hehe-liked the ending! it was cute!!! eeee! nice and cuddly! *sigh* KAgome is SO lucky!! hehe-ne wayz, good job! loved it! -Lani
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing I found EXTREMELY bad is that common thing people write about: Kagome has probably already broken her barrier, or its real name; hymen. How much she travels and battles demons, I am pretty sure she has already done it. Believe me, playing soccer broke mine... and I am posting this to all those people who do write that InuYasha is the one who breaks it. I know I know, it is just a fan fic, but still. And as many writers like to think that it hurts REALLY bad.... well sometimes it does and sometimes it doesn't... ok after that fact, it was a great lemon for your first.. And to all those ignorant people who don't read, This is a ONE SHOT, so stop begging for it to be updated!
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Reviewed By: Koyote On: October 05, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I liked it. Not only am I a really harsh critic but I don't usually take the time out to read hetero fanfiction, so for me to say that I enjoyed this story is a very rare compliment. Yeah, so there were some spelling errors and lack originality as "Broken Kagome" put it (who by the way was mean on a first fic. So it's a PWP, those are great too) anyway, Smut=good and I read plenty of it
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Title: Feh
Reviewed By: Anime Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It Was A Good Lemon For Your First One I Guess.
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Title: From one writer to another
Reviewed By: Broken Kago On: October 02, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, i know im not the greatest writer but here are just a few of my views and some constructive criticism. (sp? told you i aint perfect) Style of writing: Great sense of style, but if you would go into a BIT more detail and drag it out a BIT more. Not much! just a little. you want to keep your readers on the edge. Spelling and Grammer: Im afraid I have to agree with lauryn. Use those pronouns! on the flip side, dont over use them to a point as to where you dont know who is talking or what not. Originality/Creativity: I KNOW I KNOW Not a lot of subjects are left to choose from that havent been done to death already and sometimes you just want to scratch out an entire story and redo it yourself, but try a little variation. Mix it up. do something unexpected. ;) you never know what our dirty minds may come up with. Enjoyment factor: Again, work on detail and dragging it out. Im all into the sweet thing (dont tell my bf it will ruin my image.) Also, try to (again) throw in some unexpected elements. Overall Rating: I thought it was a great story in itself but keep working if you want your readers to REALLY dig your work. (mine sucks by the way so DO NOT use me as a model) Great use of the ears tho! thoses are my faveses ^_^!! ~Broken Kagome
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Title: horny
Reviewed By: Inu-lover On: September 29, 2003 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
horny. very horny!
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Title: I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon I LOVE IT so please update!!; )
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 03:55 CDT
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ooh that was soooooo evil leaving a lemon in a cliffy like that?>?? ooh too cruel..sigh hope you update soon k?? wants to know the rest..:-) hehe huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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Reviewed By: tatsue-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 22:07 CDT
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It's pretty good. Please finish the lemon soon cause stop in the middle was very cruel.
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Title: ...meh
Reviewed By: Lauryn N. On: September 27, 2003 21:17 CDT
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i liked it, but don't use names so often. try 'he' and 'she' since theres only the two... the frequent name use reminds me of titanic... in a horrible way.
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: September 27, 2003 20:00 CDT
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Cruel. You ended in mid-lemon. That's not fair! you need to finish it. Please I really liked it! PLease!
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