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| "For Such a Time As This" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Title: Mikey B23 here to say!!
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!! Wow...this was a fine piece of a fic here! Continue updating, this fic has very good promise in it!!!! Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.............
| Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 13, 2003 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad you updated ;) I really like this fic so very much. You are doing a great job with keeping one thinking with this time twisting thing, I like that, not only just a story, but one with a plot that gives the reader something to mentally chew on, lol. It makes me wonder what Kagome will do next to make things turn out right. You did a good job with Kikyo, so don't worry about that, you are right that she is a difficult character, I can't imagine that her personality is easy to work with, she's just so....well an enigma in some ways, lol. I just had to go and give you all the tens again ;), you do deserve them with the wonderful way that you write. Heh, and I'm glad that I was your first, and now second (though I do wish that others would review here as well, hopefully soon)reviewer on MM.org. Keep up the great work and am looking forward to reading your next chapter! Best Wishes
| Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 06, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am impressed and very much enjoying this fic! Um, let's see, what do I like the most....well you do a good job with description, I can easily picture what is happening, the characterization is on target (though I admit for a minute I was thrown when Miroku told Kagome to stop sniveling, lol, till he explained why he did so), originality is excellent. I have not come across a fic with this sort of twist in it, it has utterly captured my attention. It's made me smile and get teary-eyed...um I guess I should just sum it up and say it's wonderful and I am looking forward to reading future chapters. My only complaint...there's only two chapters before I came across this, lol. Keep up the great job and best wishes!
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