| "Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Title: Absolutely wonderful.
Reviewed By: CuriousLittleBird [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 12:09 CST
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You are a brilliant writer, and I don't say that lightly. The sheer talent shown in this work is amazing, and you've obviously spent some time polishing it up as well. The character conflicts (Seth/Chione, Bakura/Chione, and now in the ninth chapter an implied Seth/Yami conflict) are very well designed and evoke emotions in the reader. Oh, and good plot devices in the fic as well (virgin sacrifice and Pharaoh seducing Chione). All in all, a great fiction, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Sincerely, CuriousLittleBird
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Reviewed By: Jolt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 16:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh...Keep it up...
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Reviewed By: PsychodicAngel On: November 16, 2003 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it, im not a big fan of the show, but your story was so cool, so please hurry and finish it
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Reviewed By: DarkBloodStar On: November 16, 2003 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic, but it could be longer (the chapters i mean). But maybe you don't wnat them that long. Anyways, keep up the great work! 8D
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Reviewed By: Jolt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, I love this story!!!!
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: super_jm (can't log in at the moment)) On: November 13, 2003 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a great story. I love it so far. can't wait to read the rest.
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Reviewed By: lusciousdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 19:11 CST
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 23:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I 4got to mention what I wanted it to be, I think you should do it Chione and Yami. I mean they already did 'it' Pls update soon, I really luv this story.
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Title: One of the best writers!
Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 23:31 CST
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OMG! I loved it soooooo much! You are one of the best writers on mm.org! Pls finish it soon! Since you're a really good writer I was wondering if you could read my story The Sands of Time and give me a few pointers.
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Reviewed By: Nonamedreviewer On: October 29, 2003 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You dumbass. Yaoi means boy/boy love. Get it right next time. Imbecile.
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 09:01 CST
Comment/Review:
0o0... wow...
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Title: Forbidden Love
Reviewed By: Anime Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work. Your Friend, Anime Master
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