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Title: UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewed By: MISTERY PERSON!!! On: March 23, 2005 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOV THE FIC!!!!!!!! update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update updaye update update update update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update updaye update update update UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!.........plez
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Title: kool
Reviewed By: dude!!!! On: March 23, 2005 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAY awsome fic its short but its kool u should soooooooooooooooooo update!!!!!
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Title: AWSOME
Reviewed By: MEEEEEE On: March 23, 2005 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I LUV IT!!!!! even if its short & all BUT ITS AWSOME U SHOULD WRITE MORE!!!!!!! ALSO U INSPIRED ME TO WRITE A FAN FICTION!!!!! BUT NOT N E FAN FICTION A TRIGUN FAN FIC!!!!!!!!! VASH & MERLY!!!! 4EVA!!!!! I LUV THIS FIC!!!!!!!!! KEEP WRITIN if u keep writing ill give u some doughnuts!!!! ::holds up a empty plate of doughnuts & r only crumbs left: WTF HAPPENED TO MY DOUGHNUTS!!!??? ::hears someone chewing in closet:: ::opens closet to see vash eating all my doughnuts:: me: VASH!!!!!!!!!!! vash: oh hi Hanyou_grl me: U R SO DEAD!!!!! ::picks up computer chair & chases him with it:: meryl: ::pulls out labtop:: well i need to write this up befor the dead line... Hanyou_grl causes damage to walls, people, & vash....::sigh:: me: VASH I AM GONNA HURT U FOR EATING THE AUTHORS DOUGUNUTS!!!!! vash: IM SRY IM SRY IM SRY!!!!! me:U BETTER B!!!!! n e ways update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update update update updaye update updaye update update update updaye update!!!!!!!!!!!! well i g2g im gonna go kill vash & then go to my kick boxing lessons!!!! vash: I SAID I WUZ SRY!!!! me: U DONT EVEN KNOW WUT SRY IS WHEN IM DONE WITH U!!!!!! much luv to ya ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: StarFox13666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHA i compleatly forgot about this fanfic whoa ok so anyway ill try to make some new chapters up soon :)
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Reviewed By: AnimeM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a great fic write more plz.
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Title: sry
Reviewed By: StarFox13666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 19:08 CST
Comment/Review:
sry if i sound like a total bitch but i have not had a good day
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Title: U KNOW WHAT?
Reviewed By: StarFox13666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 19:07 CST
Comment/Review:
u know what?!?!?! i dont really care if u find it annoying that i say 'u' not 'you'. and i didnt have the time to write alll this shit at once and i though tgiven u something, even if it was a lil bit at a time, would be better that nuttin. Beside's, i take like all honors classes(where i can) and i get streesed out sooo all of my f'ing chapters are short! I had i emotional/stressfull/mental break down 2day and u really dont help. but THANK YOU for givening me ur input. ::shreds ur review:: really, thank you.
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Reviewed By: KK On: March 02, 2004 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhh... its the one about Meryl being a plant angel yeah, but I mean puh-eeze dont write "you" as "u" it can get very .. annoying but I love the creativity about the plant angel and stuff. Also making all 3 chapters into one 'woulda been better.
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Title: this again is the author
Reviewed By: StarFox136666 On: February 09, 2004 06:36 CST
Comment/Review:
mabey.......i guess i can try.......but i cant promise when the next chapters will come up 'cause i have alot of school prodjects to do. with anyfree time i have i shall try to write somechapters ::yawns:: darn i am tierd...its like 7:00 in the am. i need to go to school................
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Title: Thou MUST Continue!
Reviewed By: Julitica [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
YOU MUST CONTINUE! please???? I love love love it!
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Title: Me again
Reviewed By: StarFox13666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
sry this takes so long and thank u to the peps who r revewing me.....i am gonna try real hard to work on this....sorry my chapters are so short
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Title: ITS THE AUTHOR
Reviewed By: StarFox13666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 18:17 CST
Comment/Review:
i am sooooooooo not gonna keep writein this if i dont get some reviews people. so review, review, review. i will put chapter 3 up as soon as i can, i have alot of homework, prodjects and other crap to do like youth group, clubs and stuf, a diff fan fic i am doing for some friends of my'n, and drawing some pictures for those same friends, and drawing pictures for me, and reading comic books to keep up with certain comics so i can write about em.......yeah.
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Reviewed By: Yle_chan On: January 04, 2004 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Arggggggg You are evil uff uff T-T ..... Ahem Hi I like your fic It's... so far.... very interesting I can't wait to read the next chap ... so meryl is an Angel plant and Legato was her brother Ohhhhhhh and now what will happen?? Meryl will be sad for the death of her bro, won't she?? mah I will wait for your update Ja Ne Yle_chan
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Reviewed By: PnkMoHwkOFdoom On: January 01, 2004 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! The chapters are so short!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 16:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I like your story it is a new idea please updat soon
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