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| "Faint" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Akennea On: October 01, 2003 15:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good, are you planning to write more?
| Title: That was great!
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story...I think it worked very well with Duo's POV. It was light enough to get you to giggle but also something that we could all understand. I really think you should do a chapter 2 of Heero's POV...I mean it has a lot of potential. Of course that's just my opinion and not to mention I have a thing for switching POVs for each chapter. Good Luck and I'd love to see what's next!
| Title: Ita-chan
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmm,...a very good 2x1 fic,...are there any more chapters after this???....i hope if there is,...you should add it in soon,...i can't wait for the Yuuuuuummmmmyyyyyyyy Hoooooooottttttt Leeeeemmmmmoooonnnn,..*evil-hentai-grins*.... keep-up the good work kay,...till next chapter,...Jaaaaaa and Gaaaaannnnbbaatttttteeeeeeee-Nee!!^.~!!
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