Title: ... Reviewed By:Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 22:05 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: It's pretty good except you wrote 'heir' like air, and 'soul' like sole for the bottom of a shoe, but all in all its a very good fic so far.