| "Destinies Collide" Reviews/Comments [ 196 ] |
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Title: I'm really sad
Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 17, 2004 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter!!! And I'm glad you had fun on your trip and are back safe. But I'm still sad. It took you this long to update and now we have to wait again because your editor is leaving now??? Why not do it without her? Or get someone to do it until she comes back, thats what amyfushigiyugi did when Nan couldn't edit for her for a while. *sighs* I'll just suck it up and wait. *goes to sit in dark corner and hugs teddy bear*
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Title: You'll all have to suffer!!!
Reviewed By: SilverwingedAngel On: July 17, 2004 01:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUWAHAHAHA! I'm going on my annual camping trip with my family to the redwoods along the Oregon border, guys. I might get back on the 28th or on the 30th. We may get back earlier than that if something happens to my sister's cat. Soooo, as Editor of Destines Collide (*worships her boss [xfiledino] and the ground she walks on*) this won't be updated until I return. Muwahaha! Suffer! EEP! *grabs xfiledino and hides behind a wall as objects fly at them* CALM DOWN! I'LL BE BACK SOON!
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Reviewed By: Mizitkal_Dragon *not signed in* On: July 17, 2004 00:59 EDT
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wow that was just crazy! Please keep up the great work and update asap. I really can't wait to find out what happens next! I so love this story and hopw that fluff get rin back safely and that Inu/Kag get together soon cuz Koga's a fustration pooh head right now! Krystal.
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Title: Awww!
Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 03:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative! I love this story! You have done very well with writing it! I feel really sorry for Rin. Boy! Sesshoumaru is going to be f***ing PISSED! Oh, but get Kagome and Inuyasha to each other soon! I feel sorry for everyone in this story actually! Except for Kikyo and Naraku....*takes out my powerful priestess arrows and shoots both of them a billion times* Muhahaha! Die Wannabes! Just hurry up and reunite Kagome and Inuyasha. Make it like a really long thing though. Like they meet each other and are just so entranced with each other...well, nevermind...make 'em get right to it! Why? Cause I wanna know! *gets in the floor and throws a fit like a baby*
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 02:16 EDT
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Do what today is??? I'll give you a hint, it's pass that day you said you update on!!!!!! *Gets really sad* You're leaving aren't you? You're leaving and never coming back and this story will stay unfinished. I thought you cared!!!!!! *runs away crying*
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Reviewed By: RockysideofMT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY, BUT IT WOULD BE EVEN BETTER IF YOU UPDATED SOON! I lood forward to reading the rest! thanks and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 15:49 EDT
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wow. you're coming to cali!? You'll love it here. We've got really good weather right now^-^!!! anyway, onto reviewing: i liked the chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. wow. I never thought that rin and sesshy were soul mates too!!! That will provide a really cool story of it's own it's really funny to picture sesshoumaru dancing around his desk in pain. lol^_^. =' update please
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Title: I thought I might step in here for a second for my Boss-ness!
Reviewed By: SilverWingedAngel On: June 29, 2004 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I bow down to the creative genius that is xfiledino! The updates you all recieve are just edited for grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc. I didn't change anything major, I promise! If I had I would have been beaten! I did switch a few things around in chapter 19 and we finally realized the emptiness of it and filled it back up! Whee! We are (were), now, working on chapter 21 for when she returns... We've thrown out some ideas and might go with them, or maybe we'll end it unhappily! Muwahahaha! I'll cut all the happy parts and destroy the storyline! Take over the world! Muwahahahaha! JK, but who really knows what her almightiness will discover for a muse on her trip? And maybe, just maybe we'll run into one another (I live in Cali... it isn't THAT great, trust me!)... Now you all must suffer until she returns (and tells me what to do)! If any of you need an editor in the spare time... look up SSR. (No...I'm not deserting you! No...don't use the whip again! No...NO!!! NOoo---!)
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 (not logged in) On: June 29, 2004 19:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Poor, poor Rin! Save her Kagome! It was Sesshomaru that was throwing up, right? Get well, Sesshy!
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: June 29, 2004 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now this time i have a reason for not reviewing we bought a new computer and so everything was crazy for a couple days anyway i just kicked off my own mom to use the computer to update your story and i have to say that nobdy is goign to tiant kag or kill rin you hear!!!!!! update soon pppllluuuzzz
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new Chapter!!!!!! It was pretty obvious who the guy throwing up was. I wont ruin it for you who didn't figure it out. Kouga didn't rape her that last time, right? You never clarified but i hope you aren't that evil to spend all that time keeping him off and just give up! of cource you wouldn't! RIGHT!?
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new Chapter!!!!!! It was pretty obvious who the guy throwing up was. I wont ruin it for you who didn't figure it out. Kouga didn't rape her that last time, right? You never clarified but i hope you aren't that evil to spend all that time keeping him off and just give up! of cource you wouldn't! RIGHT!?
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 17:55 EDT
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OOOO! You have to soo update once you get back! LOL I love this story and it's soo interesting! I hope Kagome finds out what's going on as soon as possible and that Inuyasha gets Kag soon. Koga's such a dumbass. OO and the whole Sango wanting to grope Miroku. Both My friend and I thought it was hilarious. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 28, 2004 15:23 EDT
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Nooooooo!!!!!! You can't leave it there and go a trip!!!! How can you be so sure you'll back on the fifth?? What if you two have serious car trouble??? You must take these factors into acount!!!!!! You're just going to leave poor Rin to suffer and Kagome nearly being raped every day, and Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are losing their minds (by the way I've never seen someone act like nothing happened after they throw up) You're so mean but,....will you bring me back a keychain from Cali?!?!?!?
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Title: I love this story!!
Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 12:34 EDT
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Great update!! though I do hope that things start to get a bit happier... not that I don't love angst... I just like happy endings ^_^ Your descriptions are so vivid, I can really get a clear picture of what's going on! Update as soon as you have a chance, please!!!
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