| "The Unexpected Marriage" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: rth
Reviewed By: Sesshywife [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 21:47 CST
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oh my god i'm late you suck
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Title: love it still
Reviewed By: Sesshywife [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the way you write in this story or your grammer you sound like this boy i know he talks so fastt that he mistakes his words like "Mr.K is you married." we all be like "are you married" and this fool be like "I know i said that." and he aint dumb he actually smart so like i was saying you sometimes speak like that in your story just to let you know and oh yeah you could have used his mother's real name Izayoi i could better understand it like that. so good stroy love it update soon. (i'm not good at spelling and grammer myself so how can i talk about someone)
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Reviewed By: mental On: February 20, 2004 01:45 CST
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You finaly wrote a new chapter I'm so happy and so tired because it's 11:45 pm and I will not make sence for several hours.Well can you put more comedy please DON'T KILL ME I NEED COMEDY TO LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Can you also make it that someone tells Inuyasha and Kagome about their marage please I want Inuyasha to be tortured in a funny way so write anoter chapter soon dammit now excuse me my dortor putt me back on steroids and gave me slepping pills at the same time and I just wanna barf so bye bye.
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: ioke On: February 16, 2004 20:06 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome story so far!! i cant wait to read your enxt chapter!! update really soon!
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:42 CST
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so gald u up-dated and can't wait 2 read more^_^
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Reviewed By: BLah_BLaH On: February 13, 2004 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great SToRy!!! Up-DaTE SOON! u BeTTer! >=0
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 23:30 CST
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i've been waiting for you to update... that damn naraku... so do they custody of Kagome??? since they do will it be like step brother and sister thing??? hmm bye
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon
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Title: meng
Reviewed By: emelynooopee On: February 03, 2004 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
wow i know you finally updated after how long .. yeah back to my review... well i really like it it's different some of the characters are still the same so not that much ooc... since her rent's are dead does that mean she have to live with naraku... or are is inuyasha's family going to take her in i don't know ... but yeah you have a real talent continue the writing and i will be checking up on your work.. so better see an update real soon... hehe tah tah hun...
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Reviewed By: lilkagievixen On: February 03, 2004 03:11 CST
Comment/Review:
please please update updateu....need more more more mor emoere....lost for words...
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Reviewed By: mental On: February 02, 2004 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, write the next chapter I want to know how Kagome and Inuyasha react about the arranged marrage.Tell me what happens NOW!sorry, I have asthsma and my medicines contain steroids(did I spell that right?)my medicines make me go prety damn crazy.So keep making more chapters(please I promise to be nice).One more thing, WHERE THE HELL IS ALL THE DAMN COMEDY?
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so gald u up-date i really like this story and can't mwait 2 read more^_^
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon
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Title: Kikyo!!!I I hate her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inuyasha666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh great you had to put that dead b*tch in the fanfic!!!!! I HATE HER!!!!! (Kikyo) But I do like Kouga!!!! Yaaa Kouga!!! Kouga the coolest!!!! Love the fic!!!! Update soon!!!!!
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