| "Love is a Meaning" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkangelfirekitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
laura is right it is very confusing but i loved it anyway. if your ever bored or anything read my inuyasha fics ^_^'
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Title: Lara-chan is right
Reviewed By: Inu-lover On: October 07, 2003 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lara chan is right! do a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, it's a really interesting story! I loved it ^^ But things happened really fast, maybe you should have developed them better... Also, is confusing when you write what a person says.... For example you write: Hey Miroku said. Well That's confusing @_@ better: "Hey!" or, -Hey!- Miroku said and so on. The plot is quite original and you've got a great writing-style... A sequel would be interesting, but try to do as I said, 'cause the story was a bit too fast and confused ^^;; Bye ~
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