| "Love is a Meaning" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Drain23 On: July 28, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
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you need more practice writing. Hobbit was right, you don't show the characters very well, and you don't give good explinations about what happens. Someone can't be forced to marry, and theres no way Inuyasha could hurt her once she's away from him, he's not shown as that influential. You really need to work on your writing!
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Reviewed By: Hobbit On: July 14, 2004 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, this has to be the worst Inu fanfiction I have ever read, I could barley finish it because of how utterly confusing and stupid it was. Your style was horrofic. None of it made sence! Its like you watched one episode or read one manga of Inu Yasha and decided 'hey I think I know enough of this. I think I'll write a fan fic.' I hate to be the bearer of bad news you need to go to writing style class and get some depth. I felt no emotion in this nor any character, plus it was very blunt.
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Title: any more chapters ?
Reviewed By: kagomeserinity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
R there gong to be any more chapters ?
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur story is good and i liked how it flowed! It was great and i hope that u right another chappy! Much love! Peace out!
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 29, 2004 11:52 CST
Comment/Review:
hey why not lets have a sequel to it. I mean it can't be bad considering it's a Kag/InuYasha. I love that pairing the only thing that would make that better is a mir/san. Or any other alternate pairing you have in mind. as long as it's not that bitch and anybody but the grim reaper. Whay can't she did like she's suppose to? You don't know well me either!!! Love Miss Nikki
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 29, 2004 11:26 CST
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hey why not lets have a sequel to it. I mean it can't be bad considering it's a Kag/InuYasha. I love that pairing the only thing that would make that better is a mir/san. Or any other alternate pairing you have in mind. as long as it's not that bitch and anybody but the grim reaper. Whay can't she did like she's suppose to? You don't know well me either!!! Love Miss Nikki
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked most of this fic but what I didnt like was how the people didnt acualy talk. You said and then he said...... but you didnt put the ".." signs and without those its hard to understand when the person is talking and when he or she is not. I did like this story but i think that you need to read some more fics to get how they write when a person talks. from your friend, maria ja ne
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Title: yes sequal
Reviewed By: Boggards_babe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great i loved it. yes do a sequal that would be awsome it would be better if you used quote marks"these". also the story was a tad hard to follow but that was probaly due to the lack of quote marks other wise over all good oh and add more detaile to the lemons ... im a pervert ^_^
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Title: yes sequal
Reviewed By: Boggards_babe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great i loved it. yes do a sequal that would be awsome it would be better if you used quote marks"these". also the story was a tad hard to follow but that was probaly due to the lack of quote marks other wise over all good oh and add more detaile to the lemons ... im a pervert ^_^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad but kinda forceful aint it
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Reviewed By: icefairy247412 On: November 23, 2003 13:26 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it. it is different. please make it a sersies (spelled wrong sorry my spelling sucks) the name i left is my aim
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Reviewed By: inuyashasdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute fic
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Reviewed By: darkangelfirekitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
laura is right it is very confusing but i loved it anyway. if your ever bored or anything read my inuyasha fics ^_^'
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Title: Lara-chan is right
Reviewed By: Inu-lover On: October 07, 2003 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lara chan is right! do a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, it's a really interesting story! I loved it ^^ But things happened really fast, maybe you should have developed them better... Also, is confusing when you write what a person says.... For example you write: Hey Miroku said. Well That's confusing @_@ better: "Hey!" or, -Hey!- Miroku said and so on. The plot is quite original and you've got a great writing-style... A sequel would be interesting, but try to do as I said, 'cause the story was a bit too fast and confused ^^;; Bye ~
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