| "Kindergarten Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 14, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter and would like to write a longer review to tell you how great this story is..But I can't because I have to go lie down with my daughter .. She is not feeling well,so I'll just say please update again soon. Oh my daughter Jillian who is 16teen said she likes your story to..or also...I red your story to her to help her feel better..
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Title: aRGH!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: rikasakuraduo-heerosyliaspike [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 07:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DARN YOU FOR THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fire of phoenix On: June 14, 2004 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you. Stupid cliff hangers......
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 25, 2004 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great ..Please update again soon.. Keep up the wonderful writing...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 28, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated... This is a great story and I look forward to reading more...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 23:46 CST
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This is my ultimate favorite HeeroxDuo fic, mainly because I absolutely love Kindergarden Cop! Please try and update this one a little faster ^_^
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Title: Update soon agian! Please?!?
Reviewed By: Onee-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really great!!! I always liked the movie kindergarten cop and Heero really fits into it the way you write this! I just love it!!! ^__^ and Une is perfect for the role of the principal... especially in this chapter! I really hope you update soon again!!!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 20:54 CST
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'Obviously he's had too damn much free time if he's actually developing a personal life' Whahaha! Nice chapter, I was rather looking forward to Heero showing that nasty Mueller what-for! I liked Meiran's protective streak too. Post more!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 08, 2003 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I just really loved this chapter and look forward to reading more ...As always I think your doing a great job on writing this story and I will keep on reading it...So until your next update TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 01:06 CST
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Ah, this story has become my regular weekly (or nearly) pick-me-up, and boy did I need it today. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter where I bet some nasty bully is about to find out you can work with young children and still be veeery strong...*cackles* THe plot is still flowing nicely, and the characters live and breathe and drag us into their story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 30, 2003 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter keep up the good work and update soon... you keep writing I'll keep reading..TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 14:31 CST
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Hehehe, the Trent scene was funny. I loved the remark about the ferret :D Heero's characterisation here was well done and interesting, gave him extra dimension. Hoping to read next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 01:07 CST
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Awwww, they're in luuuv, that's so cute =-_-= pity about the massive secrets hanging above both their heads. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 20, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really,really,really,really good and I can't wait to here more so please update again soon...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 13:37 CST
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'He was *bigger* than them for god's sake, that alone should be enough reason for them to do what he told them to' That whole paragraph had me chortling. Heero and kids, that situation just had to be amusing! As ever waiting impatiently for more...
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