| "Duo gets his chance" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 20, 2004 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH I really liked it ...can't wait till your next chapter , story...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 20, 2004 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lube I wounder what flavor it is ?
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Reviewed By: me On: February 20, 2004 19:33 CST
Comment/Review:
nice
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 20, 2004 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is bad no I mean good Iv'e got to read more
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty good just grammar n spelling probs
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Reviewed By: mOOferZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 01:46 CST
Comment/Review:
please update soon!!! onegai!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 14, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that's excellent, but you're soo cruel, poor Heero and us, I'd like to know if he surrender at Duo or viceversa. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Shu-chan On: October 14, 2003 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hehe, cute. ^^ I found a few mistakes, but I;ll be happy to be a beta, It's really no problem. I'll email you. ^^
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: October 14, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im lovin it. Theres nothing better than an aroused inexperienced Heero! Keep up the good work. Chow Babe
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Title: don't have one
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 14, 2003 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I like it but where you stopped ...(Bad Girl) making us wait like this.. oh well if we must we must ...What can you say about a PWP it was good but not satisfying... LOL until next time TTFN
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Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 00:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohhh.... PLEASE write a lemon for this!!! *chibi puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 07, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting and fun. I'll be waiting the next chapter.
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Title: Ok
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 07, 2003 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I liked it... some of the words ran together and were misspelled but you could understand it.. It is a good story so keep going ..I want to here more please...
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: October 07, 2003 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaaaahhhhhh there will be a very prompt update. AM I RIGHT. C'MON NOW DONT LEAVE ME HANGIN. HURRY UP!!!!!!! Chow Babe ;)
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Reviewed By: evilchild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
C'mon!!!!!! Write more!!! I want my 2x1 lemon!!!! NOW!!!!
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